Saving Daylight

I save the daylight
When I'm here with you
In hopes it lasts, the whole night through
I will not sleep, 'till the mornings due
Spending the night's daylight with you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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March 7, 2015 at 7:37 PM
Jerry, There is sometimes exceptional eloquence in simplicity. This poem beautifully demonstrates that truism. Wonderful!
Curtis Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 7:29 AM
thanks Paul,sometimes less is more---even in poetry.
Gulley Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 6:46 PM
This is a sweet and lovely take on the Saving Daylight contest. This should win first place....Sharon G. " Good Luck in the contest." Love this write.
Curtis Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 7:30 AM
Thank you Sharon
Wilson Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 6:34 AM
How very sweet ! Hugs, Deb
Curtis Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 7:31 AM
Thank you Deb, I'm glad you like it.
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