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life boat traversed stormy seas
rescued crew at ease


2-LINE POEM - ziket Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Line Gauthier

08/13/20

seastormfree verse

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Andrea Dietrich

August 18, 2020 at 3:49 PM

A great relief to see that crew at sea!! Congrats, sweet Jan.

Jan Allison

August 18, 2020 at 3:52 PM

thanks Andrea the RLNI was founded on our little Island:-) hugs Jan xx

Krish Radhakrishna

August 18, 2020 at 2:00 PM

Back to say Congrats! Jan! Well done!

Jan Allison

August 18, 2020 at 3:47 PM

thanks Krish:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

August 18, 2020 at 12:43 PM

Congratulations for your win. A wonderful write and picture. We all need to be rescued from time to time. Enjoy your win and day.................

Jan Allison

August 18, 2020 at 1:20 PM

Thanks Paula:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands

August 18, 2020 at 10:36 AM

Congratulations for your win Jan :)

Jan Allison

August 18, 2020 at 1:20 PM

Thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

August 18, 2020 at 8:35 AM

Love the rhyme and message in this ziket, Jan. So much expressed in so few words. And congrats on your win in Line's contest. Rescue and Relief, Gershon

Jan Allison

August 18, 2020 at 1:19 PM

Thanks GW:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 18, 2020 at 7:44 AM

Excellent penning Jan. Congratulations for your win! xomo

Jan Allison

August 18, 2020 at 1:19 PM

Thanks Mo:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

August 15, 2020 at 6:07 PM

Excellent imagery, Jan. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison

August 16, 2020 at 3:29 PM

thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Krish Radhakrishna

August 15, 2020 at 2:08 AM

A nice tribute. Best wishes in the contest.

Jan Allison

August 15, 2020 at 11:50 AM

thanks Krish:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

August 14, 2020 at 11:51 AM

Nicely done, but I would not want to be in their boat! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison

August 14, 2020 at 2:56 PM

No nor me Rico!:-) hugs jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

August 14, 2020 at 10:55 AM

I love it when storm stories end well. Wish all of them could. Great job telling your story in just two rhyming lines, Jan! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn

Jan Allison

August 14, 2020 at 2:56 PM

Thanks Carolyn the RLNI was actually set up on our little Island:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

August 14, 2020 at 6:30 AM

And how happy we’d be to see the lifeboat! The seas are beautiful and dangerous.

Jan Allison

August 14, 2020 at 2:51 PM

the RLNI was founded on our Island:-) hugs jan xx

M. L. Kiser

August 13, 2020 at 5:38 PM

Good imagery, good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison

August 14, 2020 at 2:50 PM

Thanks ML:-) hugs Jan xx

Panagiota Romios

August 13, 2020 at 12:17 PM

Good luck my most deserving friend. Forever ~ Pangie

Jan Allison

August 14, 2020 at 2:45 PM

Thanks Panagiota:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne

August 13, 2020 at 12:16 PM

a definite winner here

Jan Allison

August 14, 2020 at 2:44 PM

Thanks so much jack , the RLNI was actually set up by Sir william Hillary after a ship wreck on the Isle of Man, its one charity we do support!:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

August 13, 2020 at 8:34 AM

excellent! good luck in the contest, jan - you've nailed this one!

Jan Allison

August 13, 2020 at 8:36 AM

thanks Ilene:-) it was a great challenge:-) hugs jan xx

Michelle Faulkner

August 13, 2020 at 8:15 AM

Great contrast between 'stormy seas'/'at ease' - much is said in few words, good luck in the contest, Jan.

Jan Allison

August 13, 2020 at 8:21 AM

Thanks Michelle:-) hugs Jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

August 13, 2020 at 7:51 AM

A wonderful creation. Love to you and best wishes for a win

Jan Allison

August 13, 2020 at 7:58 AM

Thanks Regina:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

August 13, 2020 at 7:04 AM

Must be such a relief to see that orange RNLI boat when you're in difficulty, all manned by brave volunteers. Just sat at Combe Martin enjoying the view. Hope you're well Tom

Jan Allison

August 13, 2020 at 7:11 AM

Thanks Tom:-) Enjoy your break, all fine here:-) hugs Jan xx

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