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I can see you now you were there when I cried out I was very lost I remember when your hand reached out to save me you opened a door a voice from inside this voice telling me, be calm do not worry child being filled with peace there was no doubt you were there smiling a laugh when I lose my way you told me to follow you and I followed you somehow you want me I do not know why really far from perfect here I made many mistakes you died on the cross for me giving me a chance Jesus, I believe I want to be by your side hearing your voice speak you gave me my life by loving me to save me you forgave my sins on my knees, I pray that everyone who needs you find their way to you Edward J. Ebbs - July 11, 2020 Written for a contest... I think I got this wrong for the contest, My Faith

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/17/2021 8:30:00 AM

A wonderful story/write. Love your line " you gave me my life. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/3/2020 7:43:00 AM

This is beautiful and heart felt. Edward, Jesus is love, and without light, how are we to be washed of life... Enjoyed, Linda

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/12/2020 1:54:00 AM

somehow you want me I do not know why really I am not perfect. - This is exactly why He wants you. Nicely built and executed.

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/12/2020 1:08:00 AM

History states; Errors have led to some of our world's GREATEST discoveries--thanks to your precious gem, Edward, that I have chanced upon--priceless expressions truly my friend -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William