Saved By the System In Waco

The real clues
are in the cobweb scraps
dropped by
hapless bronze birds
that will never
feed again

The children
are all there
in little specks of
brittle hopes in
black pieces
in the dirt

They lie there in
pools of sprinkler water
collected where it lay

Running down
heat bleached
wet white concrete walls
where globes of fire
all yellow and red
and hissing
danced in circles
around and around

Huddled in terror
they did not know
it was sent
so lovingly
to purify and protect
from some self-appointed
head of grace
of the fallen state
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Marcum Wong Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 11:34 AM
A powerful piece that seems to have little hands reaching out beyond lifeless pain. #7
Hynson Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 3:54 PM
Connie, thanks so much for stopping by to read my poetry.
Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 7:51 PM
good writing! I don't know much about the story but I believe you are describing its aftermath. it's a deep poem and well written.
Hynson Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 5:18 PM
Thank you!
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 9:47 AM
beautiful read Johnnie :) Welcome to PS :))
Hynson Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 12:37 PM
Thank you!
Osho Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 4:34 AM
beautiful johnnie. welcome
Hynson Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 12:36 PM
Hynson Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 12:36 PM
Thank you!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 9:33 PM
This is quite good Johnnie! Thanks for commenting on my Porcelain poem.
Hynson Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 12:36 PM
Thank you!
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