Saved By the System In Waco

The real clues
are in the cobweb scraps
dropped by
hapless bronze birds
that will never
feed again

The children
are all there
in little specks of
brittle hopes in
black pieces
in the dirt

They lie there in
pools of sprinkler water
collected where it lay

Running down
heat bleached
wet white concrete walls
where globes of fire
all yellow and red
and hissing
danced in circles
around and around

Huddled in terror
they did not know
it was sent
so lovingly
to purify and protect
from some self-appointed
head of grace
of the fallen state

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/16/2015 11:34:00 AM
A powerful piece that seems to have little hands reaching out beyond lifeless pain. #7
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Johnnie Hynson
Date: 12/18/2015 3:54:00 PM
Connie, thanks so much for stopping by to read my poetry.
Date: 12/11/2015 7:51:00 PM
good writing! I don't know much about the story but I believe you are describing its aftermath. it's a deep poem and well written.
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Johnnie Hynson
Date: 12/12/2015 5:18:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/10/2015 9:47:00 AM
beautiful read Johnnie :) Welcome to PS :))
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Johnnie Hynson
Date: 12/10/2015 12:37:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/10/2015 4:34:00 AM
beautiful johnnie. welcome
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Johnnie Hynson
Date: 12/10/2015 12:36:00 PM
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Johnnie Hynson
Date: 12/10/2015 12:36:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/9/2015 9:33:00 PM
This is quite good Johnnie! Thanks for commenting on my Porcelain poem.
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Johnnie Hynson
Date: 12/10/2015 12:36:00 PM
Thank you!
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