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Saved By the System In Waco

The real clues are in the cobweb scraps dropped by hapless bronze birds that will never feed again The children are all there in little specks of brittle hopes in black pieces in the dirt They lie there in pools of sprinkler water collected where it lay Running down heat bleached wet white concrete walls where globes of fire all yellow and red and hissing danced in circles around and around Huddled in terror they did not know it was sent so lovingly to purify and protect from some self-appointed head of grace of the fallen state

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Date: 12/16/2015 11:34:00 AM
A powerful piece that seems to have little hands reaching out beyond lifeless pain. #7
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Johnnie Hynson
Date: 12/18/2015 3:54:00 PM
Connie, thanks so much for stopping by to read my poetry.
Date: 12/11/2015 7:51:00 PM
good writing! I don't know much about the story but I believe you are describing its aftermath. it's a deep poem and well written.
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Johnnie Hynson
Date: 12/12/2015 5:18:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/10/2015 9:47:00 AM
beautiful read Johnnie :) Welcome to PS :))
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Johnnie Hynson
Date: 12/10/2015 12:37:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/10/2015 4:34:00 AM
beautiful johnnie. welcome
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Johnnie Hynson
Date: 12/10/2015 12:36:00 PM
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Johnnie Hynson
Date: 12/10/2015 12:36:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/9/2015 9:33:00 PM
This is quite good Johnnie! Thanks for commenting on my Porcelain poem.
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Johnnie Hynson
Date: 12/10/2015 12:36:00 PM
Thank you!

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