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Save Us While Sinking On Soapbox Stone

Community isolation the void placing we made among us to survive. I was one to you In an exhibition, which is stillness periods in the darkness. You paddle in a straight line to the outskirts of my horizon from a slab of rock. We're heading down as the paths thin and our reach narrow. Inspired by: https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/selfies_of_yesteryear_1384476 https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/soliloquy_143748 https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/opaque_and_extempore_1363761 Written: January 11, 2022 A Strand (1050) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Valsa George

Date: 1/12/2022 8:34:00 AM

"We're heading down as the paths thin and our reach narrow". Rightly put. Instead of going up, we are heading down and our reach is narrow. Man's predicament is given apt poetic presentation, Lasaad

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/11/2022 11:58:00 PM

All epidemic have an end. The problem is when it will stop not to mention how many lose their lives. Great poem.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/11/2022 3:50:00 PM

Well depicted, Lasaad: We're heading down as the paths thin and our reach narrow. All the best.

Judy Ball

Date: 1/11/2022 3:37:00 PM

The pandemic is something we all have to make allowances for. We have lost a lot of our freedom to it. Many are taking their first shots and coming down with it right away. Makes you wonder which is worse. The cure or the disease. A good write here. God Bless, JB