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Green leprechauns already know
There's zilch at ends of a rainbow 
So to own and hold
Pots of silver and gold   
Is the way to have lots of dough

Author's note: The color of leprechauns is significant here!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Macfarlane Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 12:44 PM
Awesome one Duke! I think it's cute that you have a list of favorite leprechauns : ) Hugs
Duncan Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 12:13 PM
good one Duke,,,, though I think if a person has their health, then they do have their treasure ;} So one doesn't need to go in search, even though I would ;}
Breidenthal Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 7:40 PM
Very nice one! Made me laugh (: Always, Laura
Bolden Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 4:13 AM
very nice
Palli Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 4:10 AM
Got a chuckle! Good one
Carrillo Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 5:18 PM
This is very nice Duke. I agree with you. I guess in life - we are worth according to what we have. I'm glad that we are all the same in God's eyes. Lucilla
O'Leary Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 6:51 AM
And lotsa dough means lotsa bread... Terry (interesting limerick)
Gorelick Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 1:39 PM
Good green one..to cute. BG
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 1:17 PM
cute one, Duke. have you seen one of those little guys ?? heehee
Beaufort Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 3:00 PM
They seem to be tough to hold onto.
Andresen Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 10:52 AM
Must admit that it is not so long since I've learned who leprechauns is, he was a new person for me ...... lol ..... and he is always green (?) - Well done limerick, Duke. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Beaufort Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 2:59 PM
I think my favorite green leprechaun is Franklin, followed by Grant, Jackson, Hamilton, Lincoln and Washington.
Jones Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 8:34 AM
The poem is cute but to own and hold happiness is the way to happiness. Loved it
Beaufort Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 4:00 PM
You are absolutely right! Sometimes, you have to be rich just to see that it's true! Money doesn't buy happiness. It's counter-culture in this society to strive for happiness and let the money come later (or not).
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