Save Me

broad faced koala
like Jim Henson stitched muppet
stinky hugs clamber 
wide eyed from home in gum tree 
scared away by Aussie flames
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Hawkins Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 8:06 PM
A very touching poem, more relevant now that that the people and animals that lost everything in the fires and are still recovering from that trauma now have the shared concern with the world with regard to the pandemic ... Hope all is well with you and yours stay safe ...Shirley
Thomas Avatar
February 14, 2020 at 1:38 PM
So sad QTR. I hope to actually see one someday.
Neumann Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 4:59 AM
That sums up the disaster ...
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 12:35 AM
They are the softest, sweetest, slow moving creatures you could ever want. I have felt their soft fur and their trauma I feel deeply. Very nice Tanka. xxoo
Lehman Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 5:37 PM
Very touching and heartfelt! I tear up everytime I see another news story :(
Kiser Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 6:20 AM
That's such a horrendous situation; those beautiful beings are already listed as "functionally extinct"; well penned sadness.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 1:01 AM
A great touching poem on the tragic wildfire situation, the poor hapless animals ahh!! You depict it awesomely. Kudos. Let's pray for them, for respite... Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.
Roper Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 12:35 AM
Very heartfelt poem, Richard. It's heartbreaking to see what damage is doing to Australia.
Chiri Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 2:09 PM
Such sadness with Australia! Loved this!;)
Lamoureux Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 11:03 AM
It is so sad what is happening in Australia. All those poor animals without a home. My heart goes out to them and all the people who are suffering because of the fires.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 9:31 AM
A few words but much said. I would love to hold a koala. It is a sin what is going on with the fires and animals. Enjoy your day writing...............
Proxenos Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 11:52 AM
The Australian fires are truly extreme - your poem is cute, but sad, animals and humans are exposed to fumes and flames as fires roar out of control - poor koalas! Blessings, Jennifer.
Dietrich Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 3:43 PM
I can sure picture this. Sad things for koalas and for the others there right now. Good one.
Callus Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 8:31 AM
Such a sad period for Australia and its inhabitants, Richard! This koala and many other creatures have had a lot to put up with. Hopefully the rain will come soon! Regards // paul
La France Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 11:51 PM
Richard, wonderful write, I feel such sadness for the plight of the people in Australia and all the koalas dying and all the other animals and the loss of green space _ Constance
One Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 7:54 AM
So heart breaking seeing these videos... Brings tears to my eyes...
Riabi Dziri Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 3:50 AM
A so beautiful and heartfelt rendition of a devastating state in Australia.. May God protect all Humanity and species.. My wholehearted prayers for safety and peace. Thank you, Richard for sharing your beauty.. deepest regards and blessings.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 2:54 AM
I saw the koala's on TV waddling up to people, begging for a drink. It is insanely sad! Well done. Globally aware!
Wolf Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 9:59 PM
Saw a kangaroo bounding past a burning homes n a newspaper picture. Wild Life! ~ Gershon
Buehler Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 7:18 PM
Wildfires cause so much devastation to both people and wildlife. I hope the havoc in Australia ends soon.
Adams Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 6:31 PM
powerful image...so sad this is...they are in my prayers...man and animals alike... hugs
Ligon Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 5:47 PM
Touching. It's so sad to hear of Australia going up in smoke.
Romios Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 5:12 PM
Hi Richard! I just was thinking of Australia...and out jumped this gem.. I adore Koala Bears. And just saw coverage of the fires. Absolutely, terrifying. God protect Aussies and prayers, for all animals,,too. Panagioita xo
Romios Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 12:35 PM
Hi again..I am saddened by the number of Australians killed and all the animals, too! 8 billion is what I heard....my heart breaks. Panagiota
Pandit Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 4:31 PM
Yes indeed--save me. Hope they find relief soon from raging fires. Well expressed, Richard.
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