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Savage Brut-Picture This Contest

In 5 Lines Or Less Picture This Contest
Sponsor: SKAT A

                  
Break the chains you fiend, the beast who intoxicates,
     Drain my luscious blood with your violent excoriation,
             Find utmost drunkenness killing my acute psyche,
                   Hemorrhage my destituted soul into fornication,
                       My savage brut, devour me for your consecration.
 
Written: October 31, 2015
Laura Urbaniak

Copyright © Beautiful Scars | Year Posted 2015

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Paul Callus Date: 11/11/2015 2:47:00 PM Such a unique, dark take on this visual, Laura! You offer an excellent interpretation. Congratulations on a deserved win. Regards // paul Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 11/8/2015 9:48:00 PM Congrats on ur awesome winning write Laura! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/8/2015 10:29:00 AM Very interesting take on these brutes! Congrats for your win. Login to Reply

Ralph Sergi Date: 11/8/2015 10:18:00 AM Hi Laura: beautiful choice of words! CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN! Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 11/7/2015 11:42:00 PM Laura, congratulations on your win:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 11/7/2015 6:17:00 PM Laura, Congratulations on your awesome win. I have a new blog up, "The Only Thing To Fear, Is Fear It'self" stop by and enjoy the winners and my explanation to all who join my contest. Truly enjoyed. Love SKAT Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 11/7/2015 6:33:00 PM Thank you SKAT!! I really enjoyed Picture This contest!! Thanks :) -LU I will stop be soon, be blessed

Constance La France Date: 10/31/2015 1:27:00 PM Laura, how deep and dark and fabulous, love it 7 and best of luck in the contest ~ Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 10/31/2015 5:33:00 PM Thank you Broken Wings. I appreciate your kind words you are always so sweet :) Be blessed -LU