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Savage Brut-Picture This Contest

In 5 Lines Or Less Picture This Contest Sponsor: SKAT A Break the chains you fiend, the beast who intoxicates, Drain my luscious blood with your violent excoriation, Find utmost drunkenness killing my acute psyche, Hemorrhage my destituted soul into fornication, My savage brut, devour me for your consecration. Written: October 31, 2015 Laura Urbaniak

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Paul Callus

Date: 11/11/2015 2:47:00 PM

Such a unique, dark take on this visual, Laura! You offer an excellent interpretation. Congratulations on a deserved win. Regards // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/8/2015 9:48:00 PM

Congrats on ur awesome winning write Laura!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2015 10:29:00 AM

Very interesting take on these brutes! Congrats for your win.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 11/8/2015 10:18:00 AM

Hi Laura: beautiful choice of words! CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN!

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/7/2015 11:42:00 PM

Laura, congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Skat A

Date: 11/7/2015 6:17:00 PM

Laura, Congratulations on your awesome win. I have a new blog up, "The Only Thing To Fear, Is Fear It'self" stop by and enjoy the winners and my explanation to all who join my contest. Truly enjoyed. Love SKAT

Lu Loo
Date: 11/7/2015 6:33:00 PM

Thank you SKAT!! I really enjoyed Picture This contest!! Thanks :) -LU I will stop be soon, be blessed

Constance La France

Date: 10/31/2015 1:27:00 PM

Laura, how deep and dark and fabulous, love it 7 and best of luck in the contest ~

Lu Loo
Date: 10/31/2015 5:33:00 PM

Thank you Broken Wings. I appreciate your kind words you are always so sweet :) Be blessed -LU