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SAVAGE SUN

The glaring sneering Sun has Beat me down to the pavement. The hot the heat The flaring has won. The. Violent engagement beastly Perspiration beseigement Beaming steaming gleaming Dazed AMAZED seeking shade From deathly rays. Prone to bemoan the scorching Phase of days of UNFALLING RAIN Nick named SMOKRD AND turned FIRE STARTER SUN Churned and burned

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/27/2015 6:54:00 PM
Val.. Oh the sun is so powerfully raging, yet life giving.. Nice write!
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Date: 5/27/2015 6:23:00 PM
Val, wow... I love this... I don't like the sun, I love this. I'm an indoors gal... Love it..SK
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Date: 5/27/2015 1:18:00 PM
- A great poem, very well written ! - // Anne-Lise :)
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VAL BROOKLYN Rogers BLK PANTHER
Date: 5/27/2015 1:53:00 PM
The YOU Anne-Lose. Looking forward to reading you poems also. VB Rogers