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Savage Sun

The glaring sneering Sun has
Beat me down to the pavement.

The hot the heat
The flaring has won.

The. Violent engagement beastly
Perspiration beseigement

Beaming steaming gleaming
Dazed AMAZED seeking shade
From deathly rays.

Prone to bemoan the scorching
Phase of days of UNFALLING RAIN

Nick named SMOKRD AND turned
FIRE STARTER SUN 
Churned and burned

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/27/2015 6:23:00 PM
Val, wow... I love this... I don't like the sun, I love this. I'm an indoors gal... Love it..SK
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Date: 5/27/2015 1:18:00 PM
- A great poem, very well written ! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/27/2015 1:53:00 PM
The YOU Anne-Lose. Looking forward to reading you poems also. VB Rogers

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