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Saturnine Night

standing on the edge of a precipice
challenging the tumultuous wind
feeling the chill as it touch my skin
distorted thoughts streaming
the pang of anguish so palpable
the stench of rage lingering in the air 
emanating from within
engraved on every senses

searching for the beacon light
to illuminate this cold and eerie night
to guide and bring me home
but there's nothing there
nothing to soothe the grief
there's only the sound of this silent 
but seething inner commotion
in this long and sullen night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/27/2010 12:44:00 PM
Welcome to the soup. I really enjoyed this poem and look forward to reading more of your work. So feed me
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Date: 7/13/2010 5:13:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup May. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. On your next to last stanza I think you mean bullcrap right? Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2010 8:01:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight... with luv..
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