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Saturday Surprise

riding gravel roads, windows down finding a favorite shady spot afternoon picnic, wading in the creek Saturday Surprise from my childhood let's go out to eat, fifties style. August 27, 2019 Writing Challenge 3, August 2019 - Five Lines - Sponsor - Dear Heart- Wiishkobi Ode

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Constance La France

Date: 8/31/2019 10:10:00 PM

Reason, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Free Verse of yesteryear memories ~

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 9/1/2019 8:14:00 PM

It was a fun memory which popped back into my head with your prompt. Thanks for the inspiration and the placement and the encouragement.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2019 3:51:00 AM

- Many pleasant memories :)- Congratulations on your win, R.A.P. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 8/30/2019 8:19:00 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise, yes, my family was small (just 5 of us) but we were close. Appreciate your time and energy.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/27/2019 11:45:00 AM

Everything about this - each word - made me happier and happier! I love it!

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 8/28/2019 7:47:00 AM

Lovely comment thanks, Caren. My memories stretch back a-ways. Many Sunday afternoons we'd go for a ride; always ending up at a pre-Dairy Queen type of drive-in.