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Saturday Morning

tussled hair fringed by an aureole of curtained morning sun bare legs walking diagonally across the rectangle of light spilled by the window on the living room floor body, nude between the sheets a few moments ago, now draped in an unbuttoned white shirt one size too big for her mine her face, undecided between sleep and wakefulness, has done the opposite, shed that last piece of clothing, the makeup, as if confessing a total abandoning of distance as she crosses the last few feet of space separating her and me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/7/2019 10:41:00 PM
Evocative in a nice way Bernard. the dance of life written beautifully and sensitively. Romantic poetry at its best. best regards David in NZ. ps I mam half way through my Chemotherapy with no real side effects.
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Bernard Chan
Date: 4/8/2019 4:17:00 AM
Hi David, really sorry to hear you're undergoing chemotherapy but glad that you're halfway through with no side effects. My best to you and your family. And thank you for your very generous comment. Please keep us posted on your progress. Wishing you a speedy recovery.
Date: 4/5/2019 1:47:00 PM
Exquisite penning. x
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Bernard Chan
Date: 4/6/2019 5:20:00 AM
Thank you, Maureen! Appreciated :)
Date: 4/5/2019 9:52:00 AM
Perfectly titled Bernard, well done...
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Bernard Chan
Date: 4/5/2019 1:32:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Charlie. Appreciated.

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