Saturday Morning

tussled hair 
fringed by an aureole of curtained morning sun

bare legs walking diagonally across the 
rectangle of light spilled by the window on the 
living room floor 

body, nude between the sheets a few moments ago,
now draped in an unbuttoned white shirt 
one size too big for her

mine

her face, undecided between sleep and wakefulness, 
has done the opposite,
shed that last piece of clothing,
the makeup,
as if confessing a total abandoning of distance

as she crosses the last few feet of space 
separating her and me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Smith Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 10:41 PM
Evocative in a nice way Bernard. the dance of life written beautifully and sensitively. Romantic poetry at its best. best regards David in NZ. ps I mam half way through my Chemotherapy with no real side effects.
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April 8, 2019 at 4:17 AM
Hi David, really sorry to hear you're undergoing chemotherapy but glad that you're halfway through with no side effects. My best to you and your family. And thank you for your very generous comment. Please keep us posted on your progress. Wishing you a speedy recovery.
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April 5, 2019 at 1:47 PM
Exquisite penning. x
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April 6, 2019 at 5:20 AM
Thank you, Maureen! Appreciated :)
Smith Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 9:52 AM
Perfectly titled Bernard, well done...
Chan Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 1:32 PM
Thanks a lot, Charlie. Appreciated.
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