Saturation Point - Hawaii

Saturation Point 

Dirt under my nails
A withered feeling
I did not notice the sun
Until I succumbed to a weakness
In by back and knees

My shoulders sagged
My eyelids were
Like those lead fishing lures
I found in a corner of my scrape yard
I’d like to call my garden old

The simplification of watching the
Process of spring
Is a spring 

Daffodils sprout from my table
They are yellow, from Safeway, butter-cup gold
Morning glory bells and daisy clusters
Could not be crushed
In their proliferation on the chicken-farm road

The old lady sat triangular
A heart’s distance to my house
She thanked me for a gift of an orchid and gladiola
They were on silken paper, but not fake
She thanked me for the real thing and some
Potato salad my children had delivered

I smiled-
There was no dirt under her nails.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/21/2015 4:48:00 PM
Your story flows with a pleasant beat and the words say everything by evoking thoughts within the reader's consciousness of familiarity because it is so easy to relate to the heart of your story. Emile.
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