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'saturated - In Silence'

I cried today tears were streaming down my face nobody knew - I walked around for hours crying over you nobody knew - my clothes were drenched I cried today nobody knew – because I was crying in the rain... 310820111225

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/2/2011 2:17:00 AM

Is this a repost,Wilma. It seems so familiar to me, and I REALLY like it. The message and the style. Both are great. Luv,Andrea

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 9/1/2011 10:43:00 PM

A beautiful yet sad poem Girlfriend. the concealed tears of love

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/31/2011 7:20:00 PM

A good cry does us all good and the way you say it makes me want to get started. Great verse Wilma

Kimberly Larocca

Date: 8/31/2011 5:12:00 PM

Very nice poem, thanks for sharing.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/31/2011 4:10:00 PM

sadly emotional piece Wilma with beautiful lines ..a woman's way of dealing with luv.. perfection..my friend..luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/31/2011 3:45:00 PM

Oh shucks... well you might as well be here too since it's been raining all this time-- well hopefully it will be sunny tomorrow, Missy-- well I better sleep now. Yikes. and haha, thank you for your comments in my secret poem-- I am actually not a great liar. I think. Maybe. :p mwahugs

Tony Lane

Date: 8/31/2011 9:54:00 AM

So much emotion. Loved it. Tony

David Williams

Date: 8/31/2011 9:52:00 AM

hey Wilma, just love this, very moving indeed.... David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/31/2011 9:41:00 AM

Loads of emotion flowing in the poetry I am reading this morning. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today as always Wilma. I hope it is not true my friend. Love, Carol

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/31/2011 9:01:00 AM

Been there...fantastic & gripping emotions here.

Kash Poet

Date: 8/31/2011 7:17:00 AM

So true...a sad poem.Rain always wash out our pain..I once wrote a similar poem where a lady was crying in rain so her teardrops were not visible...not posted here at the soup.....enjoyed this write Wilma.

Emma Mantle

Date: 8/31/2011 7:15:00 AM

So beautiful, love it. Great title. Best wishes em :)

Jack Horne

Date: 8/31/2011 7:08:00 AM

What a sad but powerful piece, Wilma - pure fiction, I hope. lfde

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/31/2011 7:07:00 AM

Nice twist and soft humor in this write, Wilma. You, too, seem to be in light mood