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Saturate Me

. Morn Daybreak The Beauty Saturates me A beautiful peach Color growing brighter The white light reflecting up Onto whispy clouds assures me Of a morning fair mostly sunny Blessings from above in more ways than one

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/25/2010 9:34:00 PM
congrats on placing in the contest!
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Date: 6/21/2010 6:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Etheree Me" Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/21/2010 2:37:00 AM
super glad this made the winner's list, Sara :) Congrats! --nikko :)
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Date: 6/20/2010 8:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 6/20/2010 7:12:00 PM
I love the flow of this poem. Hold on to the blessings from above. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/20/2010 6:48:00 PM
Nice shape for an etheree and the words are beautiful. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/20/2010 3:56:00 AM
Congratulations, Sara, on your number 8 win in my etheree contest. It was very nice. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/8/2010 1:13:00 PM
Love this etheree-I could almost feel the morning sun! ~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/8/2010 12:39:00 PM
You are certainly right in your assessment Etheree of the many blessings that come from above, Sara. Our blessing are many, and life does not ever stop. For death was defeated. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/8/2010 5:14:00 AM
Thank you Sara for commentig on my "Screwpine" Poem. Yes I know that we dream in colours!!! Black and white won't be too bad neither as it would leave more space for fantasies. Thank you for your kind comment. I am waiting for a parcel delivery and cannot leave my flat, but urgently needed a haircut!!!Hahaha! Hope you'll be having a great day...Gert
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Date: 6/8/2010 3:36:00 AM
Loved your choice of words in this Etheree, Sara and best of luck for the contest...Gert
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Date: 6/8/2010 12:42:00 AM
awesome feeling in this poem sara harry
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Date: 6/7/2010 11:23:00 PM
I needed this :) & it sure made me smile to read your etheree, Sara--was wondering what Saturate would lead to (haha was thinking more on scientific terms, geeky me) but reading this was a delight & I sure could use to saturate myself with those sunrays ;) wishing you the best in the contest :) --nikko :)
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Date: 6/7/2010 6:48:00 PM
Sweet and succulent .. words Sara.. and a great entry for the contest if u entered it .. very vivid ..almost brought this peach to life... luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 6/7/2010 6:25:00 PM
inspirational poem!! Love it!
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Date: 6/7/2010 4:12:00 PM
I felt better just reading this..wonderful job. BG
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Date: 6/7/2010 3:16:00 PM
I like this poem. It reads like one for a contest. This reminds me of the sun's rays coming throught the window. Best wishes to you. Great job! Joseph
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