Saturate Me

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                                                          Morn
                                                      Daybreak
                                                     The Beauty
                                                   Saturates me
                                                A beautiful peach
                                            Color growing brighter
                                        The white light reflecting up
                                      Onto whispy clouds assures me
                                      Of a morning fair mostly sunny
                             Blessings from above in more ways than one
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 9:34 PM
congrats on placing in the contest!
Brown Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 6:58 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Etheree Me" Sara. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 2:37 AM
super glad this made the winner's list, Sara :) Congrats! --nikko :)
Scripca Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 8:20 PM
Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Iolanda
Spence Sr Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 7:12 PM
I love the flow of this poem. Hold on to the blessings from above. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Blessings, Joseph
Johnson Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 6:48 PM
Nice shape for an etheree and the words are beautiful. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 3:56 AM
Congratulations, Sara, on your number 8 win in my etheree contest. It was very nice. LUv, Andrea
Conway Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 1:13 PM
Love this etheree-I could almost feel the morning sun! ~Tirzah~
Freeman Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 12:39 PM
You are certainly right in your assessment Etheree of the many blessings that come from above, Sara. Our blessing are many, and life does not ever stop. For death was defeated. Agape, Moses
Knop Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 5:14 AM
Thank you Sara for commentig on my "Screwpine" Poem. Yes I know that we dream in colours!!! Black and white won't be too bad neither as it would leave more space for fantasies. Thank you for your kind comment. I am waiting for a parcel delivery and cannot leave my flat, but urgently needed a haircut!!!Hahaha! Hope you'll be having a great day...Gert
Knop Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 3:36 AM
Loved your choice of words in this Etheree, Sara and best of luck for the contest...Gert
Horsman Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 12:42 AM
awesome feeling in this poem sara harry
K. Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 11:23 PM
I needed this :) & it sure made me smile to read your etheree, Sara--was wondering what Saturate would lead to (haha was thinking more on scientific terms, geeky me) but reading this was a delight & I sure could use to saturate myself with those sunrays ;) wishing you the best in the contest :) --nikko :)
Sweetheart Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 6:48 PM
Sweet and succulent .. words Sara.. and a great entry for the contest if u entered it .. very vivid ..almost brought this peach to life... luv.. Linda-Marie
Culverhouse Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 6:25 PM
inspirational poem!! Love it!
Gorelick Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 4:12 PM
I felt better just reading this..wonderful job. BG
Spence Sr Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 3:16 PM
I like this poem. It reads like one for a contest. This reminds me of the sun's rays coming throught the window. Best wishes to you. Great job! Joseph
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