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Satiating Dreams of Forbidden Themes

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Desires whisper in shadow of Venus And seduce intentions of clandestine love As rhythms attuned to romantic beats Pulsate zealously in galactic utopia. Bashful moon titillates lustrous vibes In interstellar space of floating nebulae As symphony of emotions arouses Throbbing hearts in exotic euphoria. Sizzling bodies elevate mystical aura Flooding blood-veins’ cosmic jubilation And longings waltz on sensuous clouds As jolt of excitement inflames bosoms. A tango of passions presents a ballet For one more spin on planetary stage High on elation of moonlit ecstasy Savoring kisses of heavenly blessings, Satiating dreams of forbidden themes Unlocking secrets of mysterious galaxy. January 14, 2020 Placed 1st: Picture prompt poetry contest Sponsor: Brenda Chiri Placed 3rd: Strand choice 9 contest by Brian Strand

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/2/2020 4:54:00 PM

You paint a perfect picture with these words, Vijay :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2020 3:18:00 PM

big congrats with two wins, not only in the original contest but with Brian!! Way to go, Vijay!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/30/2020 8:48:00 AM

Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 1/29/2020 12:22:00 PM

Again Vijay congrats on another win!;)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/29/2020 3:17:00 PM

Thank you Brenda--much appreciate.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/28/2020 8:46:00 AM

- Congratulations on your top win ... dreams that reach heaven, Vijay ... romantic and smoking hot ... :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/29/2020 8:57:00 AM

Much appreciate Anne-Lise--many thanks.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 1/28/2020 12:10:00 AM

Vijay this was rather hot hot hot! And I simply loved it! Thank you got dnterjng my contest and congratulations on your top win!;)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/29/2020 8:57:00 AM

Thank you Brenda--much appreciate your kind remarks.

Hello There

Date: 1/26/2020 11:13:00 PM

If words could take someone there, these would.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/27/2020 7:20:00 AM

Thank you--much appreciate, HT.

Running Wolves

Date: 1/24/2020 9:45:00 AM

Very awesomely done, this engages the reader in almost everyway... nice one

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/24/2020 3:55:00 PM

So kind of you--much appreciate--many thanks, RW.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/20/2020 9:14:00 AM

You have certainly found a lot of inspiration from this picture prompt, Vijay! I'm always captivated by your free verse. In m.h.o. this is a high flying winner! Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/21/2020 7:47:00 AM

So kind of you Paul--much appreciate--many thanks. Regards!

Silent One

Date: 1/19/2020 6:10:00 AM

Now that is a thought... very sensual poem my friend..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/19/2020 7:38:00 AM

Much appreciate my friend--many thanks, SO.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/18/2020 8:55:00 AM

Ooh la la Vijay. this one is so hot it fogged up my screen.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/19/2020 7:37:00 AM

Thank you Richard--much appreciate.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 1/17/2020 11:05:00 AM

Wow Vijay, this is exquisite and I am sure will be on top of the list of winners. Your poetic pen has painted a most erotic scene in the midst of space, truly beautiful dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/19/2020 7:37:00 AM

So very kind of you Ann--much appreciate the vote of confidence my friend. many many thanks.

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/16/2020 10:36:00 AM

it most certainly does, "Satiating dreams of forbidden themes Unlocking secrets of mysterious galaxy." for those who brave it...a colorful write...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/16/2020 4:18:00 PM

So true. Much appreciate Arturo--many thanks.

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/16/2020 6:57:00 AM

An amazing poem of love..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/16/2020 4:18:00 PM

Much appreciate Harry--many thanks.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 1/15/2020 10:33:00 AM

Vijay, This poem of taboo passions is right up your alley. Good luck in the contest. -Richard

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/15/2020 2:47:00 PM

Many thanks Richard--much appreciate, as always.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/15/2020 7:57:00 AM

Vividly descriptive and SO romantic, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/15/2020 2:47:00 PM

Much appreciate, Janice--many many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/15/2020 6:01:00 AM

Sentimental,evocative write my friend and talented poet. So well penned, have marked it as a fav. Blessings, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/15/2020 2:47:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer--much appreciate your visit and comments, as always.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/15/2020 5:37:00 AM

Sensual, energetic and beautifully penned to the prompt; good luck in the contest, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/15/2020 2:46:00 PM

So very kind of you MLK--much appreciate--many thanks.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 1/14/2020 11:01:00 PM

How beautifully you let them mate.. the galaxy and the minds... Too good to comment my friend.. Best wishes..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/15/2020 2:44:00 PM

Thank you Jenish--much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/14/2020 10:23:00 PM

You paint romance, beauty, love and passion- with an artist's pen. From the heart. This leaves me breathless. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/15/2020 2:44:00 PM

I am happy, as always, to read your kind remarks, Brandy. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/14/2020 3:49:00 PM

Wow. Exquisite penning Vijay. This one sizzles with depths of passion and stunning imagery. This should be a top win it’s excellent in my opinion :) huge

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/15/2020 2:43:00 PM

A joy to read your supportive comments, my friend--and much appreciate the vote of confidence..many thanks, Sandy.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/14/2020 1:04:00 PM

Awesome, Vijay, I need a cold shower to cool down after reading this passionate poem! Sometimes I forgot how wonderful the "tango of passion" can be. Best wishes in the contest, my friend! Hugs, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/15/2020 2:41:00 PM

I thought the photo prompt was evocative of tango of passions--so glad you liked the poem..much appreciate, as always, my friend. many thanks, Carolyn.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/14/2020 12:19:00 PM

Brilliant work Vijay, you are the master of romance. Good luck, but I don't think you'll need it. Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/15/2020 2:37:00 PM

You are so very kind Tom--always appreciate and value your opinion--many many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/14/2020 11:39:00 AM

Wow this is impressive Vijay! It goes wonderfully with the picture she has given for the contest too. This is sure to be placed high! : ) xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/15/2020 2:36:00 PM

Appreciate the words of confidence, Connie--they mean a lot coming from you. Many thanks.

Joseph May

Date: 1/14/2020 9:30:00 AM

Great write Vijay, Best for a top win...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/15/2020 2:35:00 PM

Much appreciate Joseph--many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/14/2020 7:56:00 AM

Sensuous rupture of flaming passions that set Venus herself aflame dearest, Vijay! What a romantic language! Superb work of art my friend!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/15/2020 2:34:00 PM

That is so very kind my dear friend--much appreciate--many thanks.