Vijay Pandit Poet Free verse

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Satiating Dreams of Forbidden Themes

Desires whisper in shadow of Venus
And seduce intentions of clandestine love 
As rhythms attuned to romantic beats
Pulsate zealously in galactic utopia.

Bashful moon titillates lustrous vibes
In interstellar space of floating nebulae
As symphony of emotions arouses
Throbbing hearts in exotic euphoria.

Sizzling bodies elevate mystical aura 
Flooding blood-veins’ cosmic jubilation
And longings waltz on sensuous clouds
As jolt of excitement inflames bosoms.

A tango of passions presents a ballet 
For one more spin on planetary stage
High on elation of moonlit ecstasy
Savoring kisses of heavenly blessings,

Satiating dreams of forbidden themes
Unlocking secrets of mysterious galaxy.

January 14, 2020
Placed 1st: Picture prompt poetry contest
Sponsor: Brenda Chiri
Placed 3rd: Strand choice 9 contest by Brian Strand

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Angela Crabtree November 2, 2020 at 4:54 PM You paint a perfect picture with these words, Vijay :)

Andrea Dietrich January 29, 2020 at 3:18 PM big congrats with two wins, not only in the original contest but with Brian!! Way to go, Vijay!! Vijay Pandit January 30, 2020 at 8:48 AM Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Brenda Chiri January 29, 2020 at 12:22 PM Again Vijay congrats on another win!;) Vijay Pandit January 29, 2020 at 3:17 PM Thank you Brenda--much appreciate.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2020 at 8:46 AM - Congratulations on your top win ... dreams that reach heaven, Vijay ... romantic and smoking hot ... :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit January 29, 2020 at 8:57 AM Much appreciate Anne-Lise--many thanks.

Brenda Chiri January 28, 2020 at 12:10 AM Vijay this was rather hot hot hot! And I simply loved it! Thank you got dnterjng my contest and congratulations on your top win!;) Vijay Pandit January 29, 2020 at 8:57 AM Thank you Brenda--much appreciate your kind remarks.

Hello There January 26, 2020 at 11:13 PM If words could take someone there, these would. Vijay Pandit January 27, 2020 at 7:20 AM Thank you--much appreciate, HT.

Running Wolves January 24, 2020 at 9:45 AM Very awesomely done, this engages the reader in almost everyway... nice one Vijay Pandit January 24, 2020 at 3:55 PM So kind of you--much appreciate--many thanks, RW.

Paul Callus January 20, 2020 at 9:14 AM You have certainly found a lot of inspiration from this picture prompt, Vijay! I'm always captivated by your free verse. In m.h.o. this is a high flying winner! Regards // paul Vijay Pandit January 21, 2020 at 7:47 AM So kind of you Paul--much appreciate--many thanks. Regards!

Silent One January 19, 2020 at 6:10 AM Now that is a thought... very sensual poem my friend.. Vijay Pandit January 19, 2020 at 7:38 AM Much appreciate my friend--many thanks, SO.

Richard Lamoureux January 18, 2020 at 8:55 AM Ooh la la Vijay. this one is so hot it fogged up my screen. Vijay Pandit January 19, 2020 at 7:37 AM Thank you Richard--much appreciate.

Ann Gilmour January 17, 2020 at 11:05 AM Wow Vijay, this is exquisite and I am sure will be on top of the list of winners. Your poetic pen has painted a most erotic scene in the midst of space, truly beautiful dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx Vijay Pandit January 19, 2020 at 7:37 AM So very kind of you Ann--much appreciate the vote of confidence my friend. many many thanks.

Arturo Michael January 16, 2020 at 10:36 AM it most certainly does, "Satiating dreams of forbidden themes Unlocking secrets of mysterious galaxy." for those who brave it...a colorful write... Vijay Pandit January 16, 2020 at 4:18 PM So true. Much appreciate Arturo--many thanks.

Harry Horsman January 16, 2020 at 6:57 AM An amazing poem of love.. Vijay Pandit January 16, 2020 at 4:18 PM Much appreciate Harry--many thanks.

Quoth Theraven January 15, 2020 at 10:33 AM Vijay, This poem of taboo passions is right up your alley. Good luck in the contest. -Richard Vijay Pandit January 15, 2020 at 2:47 PM Many thanks Richard--much appreciate, as always.

Janice Canerdy January 15, 2020 at 7:57 AM Vividly descriptive and SO romantic, Vijay! Janice Vijay Pandit January 15, 2020 at 2:47 PM Much appreciate, Janice--many many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos January 15, 2020 at 6:01 AM Sentimental,evocative write my friend and talented poet. So well penned, have marked it as a fav. Blessings, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit January 15, 2020 at 2:47 PM Thank you Jennifer--much appreciate your visit and comments, as always.

M. L. Kiser January 15, 2020 at 5:37 AM Sensual, energetic and beautifully penned to the prompt; good luck in the contest, Vijay! Vijay Pandit January 15, 2020 at 2:46 PM So very kind of you MLK--much appreciate--many thanks.

Jenish Somadas January 14, 2020 at 11:01 PM How beautifully you let them mate.. the galaxy and the minds... Too good to comment my friend.. Best wishes.. Vijay Pandit January 15, 2020 at 2:44 PM Thank you Jenish--much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole January 14, 2020 at 10:23 PM You paint romance, beauty, love and passion- with an artist's pen. From the heart. This leaves me breathless. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit January 15, 2020 at 2:44 PM I am happy, as always, to read your kind remarks, Brandy. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Sandra Adams January 14, 2020 at 3:49 PM Wow. Exquisite penning Vijay. This one sizzles with depths of passion and stunning imagery. This should be a top win it’s excellent in my opinion :) huge Vijay Pandit January 15, 2020 at 2:43 PM A joy to read your supportive comments, my friend--and much appreciate the vote of confidence..many thanks, Sandy.

Carolyn Devonshire January 14, 2020 at 1:04 PM Awesome, Vijay, I need a cold shower to cool down after reading this passionate poem! Sometimes I forgot how wonderful the "tango of passion" can be. Best wishes in the contest, my friend! Hugs, Carolyn Vijay Pandit January 15, 2020 at 2:41 PM I thought the photo prompt was evocative of tango of passions--so glad you liked the poem..much appreciate, as always, my friend. many thanks, Carolyn.

Tom Cunningham January 14, 2020 at 12:19 PM Brilliant work Vijay, you are the master of romance. Good luck, but I don't think you'll need it. Tom Vijay Pandit January 15, 2020 at 2:37 PM You are so very kind Tom--always appreciate and value your opinion--many many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong January 14, 2020 at 11:39 AM Wow this is impressive Vijay! It goes wonderfully with the picture she has given for the contest too. This is sure to be placed high! : ) xxoo Vijay Pandit January 15, 2020 at 2:36 PM Appreciate the words of confidence, Connie--they mean a lot coming from you. Many thanks.

Joseph May January 14, 2020 at 9:30 AM Great write Vijay, Best for a top win... Vijay Pandit January 15, 2020 at 2:35 PM Much appreciate Joseph--many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis January 14, 2020 at 7:56 AM Sensuous rupture of flaming passions that set Venus herself aflame dearest, Vijay! What a romantic language! Superb work of art my friend! Vijay Pandit January 15, 2020 at 2:34 PM That is so very kind my dear friend--much appreciate--many thanks.

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