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Satiated Within Thoughts

beneath the dahlia rise splashed across morning skies i lose myself in this thick air and rumination of mind where thoughts of you linger i can feel this moist air as it breathes heavy upon me like a windless breath beneath a caress from lover's lips in passion's heat i wring myself among these drops beaded as they fall across bare skin before the climax of memories break with day the blue depths of cloudless skies does not compare to the voids within my longing i yearn for you more so than this day yet momentarily am satiated in memories that blush me like morning's rise July 21, 2019

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Chris Green

Date: 2/17/2020 10:23:00 AM

Wow, this was beautiful. And once again a contest brings me one I haven't read before. Congrats on your own my friend. This wonderful heart stirring poem deserved to be at the top.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/18/2020 9:15:00 AM

Thank you so much Chris... hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2019 4:01:00 AM

- Romantic and lovely thoughts, Sandra - A beautiful poem - Congratulations on a great 1st place in the contest :) - Best wishes for a wonderful new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/16/2020 9:34:00 PM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise… hugs

John Gondolf

Date: 8/18/2019 4:50:00 PM

Back with congrats on your win, Sandy, I enjoyed reading this gem once again. Hugs, John

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/18/2019 5:35:00 PM

Thank you so much John.... hugs :)

John Hamilton

Date: 8/18/2019 4:11:00 PM

Now how did I miss this one, this is a definite fave Sandy, I'm glad SO recognized the brilliance of this write, and it was rewarded with a fitting first place!

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/18/2019 5:34:00 PM

i believe you had a contest to judge as this was the last or one of the last posts before my montana trip and i received word of a win in your contest while away.... thank you for all your support and the honor of a fave :) hugs

Silent One

Date: 8/18/2019 2:20:00 PM

You really know how to take a reader into into your poem... I love how you format them also, this is just brilliant... love that last stanza, describes yearning so well.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/18/2019 4:51:00 PM

Thank you my friend, for not only the kind words but for the honor of a win and hosting this great contest :) hugs

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/28/2019 7:09:00 AM

Sandra, I am humbled by this one. Wow! What a metaphoric write! A winner to my trembling heart as I read it. "i wring myself among these drops beaded as they fall across bare skin before the climax of memories break with day" WOW!

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/18/2019 4:50:00 PM

I don’t know how I missed your second comment but this was the last poem I wrote before Montana so I had some catching up to do when I returned. Sorry. Thanks again for your great comment :) hugs

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/28/2019 7:09:00 AM

I did not realize I had already commented, but I do not care. I still wanted to comment again. I may be back later to comment another time actually.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/27/2019 3:30:00 PM

super write Sandra, great imagery filled with insightful thought, Great stuff!

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/27/2019 5:04:00 PM

Thank you Gordon...we were in a heat wave here and i think that helped guide the muse :) hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/27/2019 2:39:00 PM

A hot write, sensuous and titillating write in fact erotic and yet gentle and lingers long after one has read this WOW poem. It leaves a tingling sensation - well penned Sandra. Hugs, Jennifer.

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/27/2019 5:03:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer, not often my muse takes a sensual turn...some topics tend to bring that side out though! :) hugs

Caycay Jennings

Date: 7/26/2019 9:09:00 PM

Memories serve as therapeutic / avoidance company - at least they have in my life. This is excellent writing that elevated me to magic inside its ink! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/27/2019 5:02:00 PM

Thank you Cay Cay....your words are always so kind :) hugs

Georgia Kereopa

Date: 7/26/2019 7:59:00 PM

Is it getting hot in here? Beautiful write, imagery and feelings ooze all over the page. Good luck in the contest Sandra

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/27/2019 5:01:00 PM

Thank you Georgia...i think the heat wave fed my muse :) hugs

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 7/25/2019 1:09:00 PM

Hot Stuff.......Beautiful piece, first prize material ............Good Luck Sandra

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/26/2019 9:21:00 AM

Thank you for the visit and kind comments Jerry :) hugs

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/22/2019 9:07:00 AM

Powerful work; beautifully penned.

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/26/2019 9:20:00 AM

Thank you so much :) hugs

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/22/2019 5:38:00 AM

Poignant and deep, Sandra. Have fun on vacation.

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/26/2019 9:20:00 AM

Thank you Caren....Montana skies are gorgeous! Vacation was a blast! hugs :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/21/2019 9:12:00 PM

Now this is what I call deep thinking! I enjoyed these penetrating images. ;0)

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/21/2019 9:33:00 PM

Thank you Rick :) hugs

John Gondolf

Date: 7/21/2019 7:05:00 PM

Your words describe a deep longing, as I read your verse I feel these emotions. Nicely penned, Sandy, best on luck in the contest. Hugs, John

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/21/2019 7:25:00 PM

Thanks John, it was the first thought hunger brought forth...i leave for vacation in several short hours so was trying to pen what i could for contests before my departure....hugs :)

James Horn

Date: 7/21/2019 4:09:00 PM

Morning Has Broken and so has each seed, To become food that others will feed; Which was required and they will need.

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/21/2019 6:08:00 PM

love your poetic response...thanks for stopping by and kindly commenting :) hugs

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/21/2019 2:13:00 PM

A great entry for Silent's contest Sandra. I will have to go and see what he requires. You have expressed that longing superbly! : ) xxoo

Sandra Adams
Date: 7/21/2019 2:59:00 PM

Thank you Connie wanted to write one before I leave for vacation as it will probably fill up fast. :) hugs