Sandra Adams Poet Free verse

Satiated Within Thoughts

beneath the dahlia rise
splashed across morning skies
i lose myself in this thick air
and rumination of mind
where thoughts of you linger

i can feel this moist air
as it breathes heavy
upon me
like a windless breath
beneath a caress
from lover's lips
in passion's heat

i wring myself
among these drops
beaded as they fall
across bare skin
before the climax
of memories
break with day

the blue depths
of cloudless skies
does not compare
to the voids within
my longing

i yearn for you
more so than this day
yet momentarily
am satiated
in memories
that blush me
like morning's rise


July 21, 2019

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Chris Green February 17, 2020 at 10:23 AM Wow, this was beautiful. And once again a contest brings me one I haven't read before. Congrats on your own my friend. This wonderful heart stirring poem deserved to be at the top. Sandra Adams February 18, 2020 at 9:15 AM Thank you so much Chris... hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen August 19, 2019 at 4:01 AM - Romantic and lovely thoughts, Sandra - A beautiful poem - Congratulations on a great 1st place in the contest :) - Best wishes for a wonderful new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sandra Adams February 16, 2020 at 9:34 PM Thank you so much Anne-Lise… hugs

John Gondolf August 18, 2019 at 4:50 PM Back with congrats on your win, Sandy, I enjoyed reading this gem once again. Hugs, John Sandra Adams August 18, 2019 at 5:35 PM Thank you so much John.... hugs :)

John Hamilton August 18, 2019 at 4:11 PM Now how did I miss this one, this is a definite fave Sandy, I'm glad SO recognized the brilliance of this write, and it was rewarded with a fitting first place! Sandra Adams August 18, 2019 at 5:34 PM i believe you had a contest to judge as this was the last or one of the last posts before my montana trip and i received word of a win in your contest while away.... thank you for all your support and the honor of a fave :) hugs

Silent One August 18, 2019 at 2:20 PM You really know how to take a reader into into your poem... I love how you format them also, this is just brilliant... love that last stanza, describes yearning so well.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest.. Sandra Adams August 18, 2019 at 4:51 PM Thank you my friend, for not only the kind words but for the honor of a win and hosting this great contest :) hugs

Caren Krutsinger July 28, 2019 at 7:09 AM Sandra, I am humbled by this one. Wow! What a metaphoric write! A winner to my trembling heart as I read it. "i wring myself among these drops beaded as they fall across bare skin before the climax of memories break with day" WOW! Sandra Adams August 18, 2019 at 4:50 PM I don’t know how I missed your second comment but this was the last poem I wrote before Montana so I had some catching up to do when I returned. Sorry. Thanks again for your great comment :) hugs Caren Krutsinger July 28, 2019 at 7:09 AM I did not realize I had already commented, but I do not care. I still wanted to comment again. I may be back later to comment another time actually.

Gordon Mcconnell July 27, 2019 at 3:30 PM super write Sandra, great imagery filled with insightful thought, Great stuff! Sandra Adams July 27, 2019 at 5:04 PM Thank you Gordon...we were in a heat wave here and i think that helped guide the muse :) hugs

Jennifer Proxenos July 27, 2019 at 2:39 PM A hot write, sensuous and titillating write in fact erotic and yet gentle and lingers long after one has read this WOW poem. It leaves a tingling sensation - well penned Sandra. Hugs, Jennifer. Sandra Adams July 27, 2019 at 5:03 PM Thank you Jennifer, not often my muse takes a sensual turn...some topics tend to bring that side out though! :) hugs

CayCay Godwin July 26, 2019 at 9:09 PM Memories serve as therapeutic / avoidance company - at least they have in my life. This is excellent writing that elevated me to magic inside its ink! Poetry hugs ... CayCay Sandra Adams July 27, 2019 at 5:02 PM Thank you Cay Cay....your words are always so kind :) hugs

Georgia Kereopa July 26, 2019 at 7:59 PM Is it getting hot in here? Beautiful write, imagery and feelings ooze all over the page. Good luck in the contest Sandra Sandra Adams July 27, 2019 at 5:01 PM Thank you Georgia...i think the heat wave fed my muse :) hugs

Jerry T Curtis July 25, 2019 at 1:09 PM Hot Stuff.......Beautiful piece, first prize material ............Good Luck Sandra Sandra Adams July 26, 2019 at 9:21 AM Thank you for the visit and kind comments Jerry :) hugs

M. L. Kiser July 22, 2019 at 9:07 AM Powerful work; beautifully penned. Sandra Adams July 26, 2019 at 9:20 AM Thank you so much :) hugs

Caren Krutsinger July 22, 2019 at 5:38 AM Poignant and deep, Sandra. Have fun on vacation. Sandra Adams July 26, 2019 at 9:20 AM Thank you Caren....Montana skies are gorgeous! Vacation was a blast! hugs :)

Richard Lamoureux July 21, 2019 at 9:12 PM Now this is what I call deep thinking! I enjoyed these penetrating images. ;0) Sandra Adams July 21, 2019 at 9:33 PM Thank you Rick :) hugs

John Gondolf July 21, 2019 at 7:05 PM Your words describe a deep longing, as I read your verse I feel these emotions. Nicely penned, Sandy, best on luck in the contest. Hugs, John Sandra Adams July 21, 2019 at 7:25 PM Thanks John, it was the first thought hunger brought forth...i leave for vacation in several short hours so was trying to pen what i could for contests before my departure....hugs :)

James Horn July 21, 2019 at 4:09 PM Morning Has Broken and so has each seed, To become food that others will feed; Which was required and they will need. Sandra Adams July 21, 2019 at 6:08 PM love your poetic response...thanks for stopping by and kindly commenting :) hugs

Connie Marcum Wong July 21, 2019 at 2:13 PM A great entry for Silent's contest Sandra. I will have to go and see what he requires. You have expressed that longing superbly! : ) xxoo Sandra Adams July 21, 2019 at 2:59 PM Thank you Connie wanted to write one before I leave for vacation as it will probably fill up fast. :) hugs