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Satan's Spawn

Spawn of Satan

Behold the demonized beasts, Satan's spawn!

Chained to the gates of Hell for all Eternity

Eyes of fiery coals and drooling mouths agape.

They roar in anger to sate their hunger with

                             YOU!







October 30, 2015
Contest in 5 lines or less.

Copyright © Lin Lane | Year Posted 2015

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Paul Callus Date: 11/11/2015 1:28:00 PM Excellent dark and chilly interpretation, Lin!! A most worthy winner...Congratulations!! // paul Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 11/11/2015 1:49:00 PM Thanks a lot, Paul.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 11/8/2015 9:35:00 PM Congrats on ur awesome winning write Lin! Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 11/9/2015 1:52:00 AM Thank you very much.

Constance La France Date: 11/8/2015 11:59:00 AM Lin congratulations on your placement with this awesome write. .. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 11/8/2015 12:03:00 PM Loads of thanks, BW.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/8/2015 10:18:00 AM I really like how you did yours. So descriptive in those few lines. Congrats, Lin. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 11/8/2015 10:41:00 AM Thank you so much, Andrea. I'm glad we were limited to a few lines because my imagination was beginning to run away with me, and I didn't like where it was going. lol

Ralph Sergi Date: 11/8/2015 9:21:00 AM Hi Lin: Very fearsome description! Congrats on number 3! Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 11/8/2015 9:27:00 AM Thanks so much, Ralph.

Samiha Zubair Date: 11/8/2015 4:27:00 AM Greatly enjoyed reading your poem. Congrats Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 11/8/2015 7:10:00 AM He, Samiha.. I appreciate the read and the congrats.

Alexis Y. Date: 11/7/2015 11:11:00 PM Lin, this really good. Great imagery. Congrats on you win it was well deserved:-) Alexis Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 11/8/2015 7:10:00 AM Many thanks, Alexis. It definitely took me out of my realm, and that was kinda scary. lol

Michael Tor Date: 11/7/2015 10:32:00 PM One of my favorites Lin. Congratulations. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 11/8/2015 7:09:00 AM Hiya, Michael...I'm so glad you like the creepy side of me. lol

Janice Canerdy Date: 11/7/2015 8:01:00 PM This winning poem is awesome. Congratulations! Janice Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 11/8/2015 7:08:00 AM Thank you...so much, Janice.

Skat A Date: 11/7/2015 6:19:00 PM Lin, Congratulations on your awesome win. I have a new blog up, "The Only Thing To Fear, Is Fear It'self" stop by and enjoy the winners and my explanation to all who join my contest. Truly enjoyed. Love SKAT Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 11/8/2015 7:08:00 AM I will do, and thanks.

Julia Ward Date: 10/31/2015 5:06:00 AM A drama indeed! Best wishes, Julia Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 10/31/2015 5:09:00 AM Thank you. If you've seen the picture SKAT used, you'd know how evil this had to be.