Lin Lane Poet Free verse

Satan's Spawn

Spawn of Satan

Behold the demonized beasts, Satan's spawn!

Chained to the gates of Hell for all Eternity

Eyes of fiery coals and drooling mouths agape.

They roar in anger to sate their hunger with

                             YOU!







October 30, 2015
Contest in 5 lines or less.

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Paul Callus November 11, 2015 at 1:28 PM Excellent dark and chilly interpretation, Lin!! A most worthy winner...Congratulations!! // paul Lin Lane November 11, 2015 at 1:49 PM Thanks a lot, Paul.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 8, 2015 at 9:35 PM Congrats on ur awesome winning write Lin! Lin Lane November 9, 2015 at 1:52 AM Thank you very much.

Constance La France November 8, 2015 at 11:59 AM Lin congratulations on your placement with this awesome write. .. Lin Lane November 8, 2015 at 12:03 PM Loads of thanks, BW.

Andrea Dietrich November 8, 2015 at 10:18 AM I really like how you did yours. So descriptive in those few lines. Congrats, Lin. Lin Lane November 8, 2015 at 10:41 AM Thank you so much, Andrea. I'm glad we were limited to a few lines because my imagination was beginning to run away with me, and I didn't like where it was going. lol

Ralph Sergi November 8, 2015 at 9:21 AM Hi Lin: Very fearsome description! Congrats on number 3! Lin Lane November 8, 2015 at 9:27 AM Thanks so much, Ralph.

Samiha Zubair November 8, 2015 at 4:27 AM Greatly enjoyed reading your poem. Congrats Lin Lane November 8, 2015 at 7:10 AM He, Samiha.. I appreciate the read and the congrats.

Alexis Y. November 7, 2015 at 11:11 PM Lin, this really good. Great imagery. Congrats on you win it was well deserved:-) Alexis Lin Lane November 8, 2015 at 7:10 AM Many thanks, Alexis. It definitely took me out of my realm, and that was kinda scary. lol

Michael Tor November 7, 2015 at 10:32 PM One of my favorites Lin. Congratulations. Lin Lane November 8, 2015 at 7:09 AM Hiya, Michael...I'm so glad you like the creepy side of me. lol

Janice Canerdy November 7, 2015 at 8:01 PM This winning poem is awesome. Congratulations! Janice Lin Lane November 8, 2015 at 7:08 AM Thank you...so much, Janice.

Skat A November 7, 2015 at 6:19 PM Lin, Congratulations on your awesome win. I have a new blog up, "The Only Thing To Fear, Is Fear It'self" stop by and enjoy the winners and my explanation to all who join my contest. Truly enjoyed. Love SKAT Lin Lane November 8, 2015 at 7:08 AM I will do, and thanks.

Julia Ward October 31, 2015 at 5:06 AM A drama indeed! Best wishes, Julia Lin Lane October 31, 2015 at 5:09 AM Thank you. If you've seen the picture SKAT used, you'd know how evil this had to be.