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Sassy Lady

Sassy Lady Beautiful Sassy lady In a white dress I listen to the Click, click, click As she walks by In high heels Mesmerized With the sway of her sexy hips As she turns and walks away With a glimmering Spark in her eye I can read her mind To her surprise Over a subway vent Her dress is blown upward With the blast of warm air Embarrassed She turns back Looks my direction With a playful flirtation As excitement arouses © 7/14/2015
Contest Name: Flirt Sponsor: Casarah Nance
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 24, 2015 at 6:01 PM
Eve, Congratulations on your XOOL flirting poetic win. Love LINDA"
Roper Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 9:01 PM
Thank you, Linda. Hugsoxox
A. Sharma Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 2:38 AM
Wonderful tribute n win Eve! Congrats!
Roper Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 9:01 PM
Thank you, Dr. Upma A. Sharma Hugs Eve
Y. Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 8:17 PM
Eve, l remembered this piece. And it was a wonderful tribrute to a sassy icon.Congratulations on your awesome win:-)Alexis
Roper Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 9:02 PM
Thank you, Alexis, for the awesome support. Hugs Eve
Carter Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 7:55 AM
Love this moment fun poem Eve congrats on your win!
Roper Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 9:03 PM
Thank you, Lee, Hugs eve
Wigley Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 8:43 PM
Nice flirt and a lovely nod to an icon, Eve, congratulations. Viv x
Roper Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 10:39 PM
Thank you, Viv.
May Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 8:35 PM
Congrats on your win Eve...is tha t Marilyn?
Roper Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 10:41 PM
Thank you, Joseph. Sure is " Seven Year Itch" 1955 scene
A  Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:32 PM
Eve,, congratulations on your flirtatious win. SKAT LOVE
Roper Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 3:10 PM
Thank you,Skat, hugs Eve
Lawless Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:23 PM
That's some seriously planned flirting...taking the time memorize the subway schedule....Well done Eve.
Roper Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 3:08 PM
Hello John, this was easy she was one of my favorite actress she was beautiful and she still is even though she's gone. Thank you for the compliment hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:08 PM
wonderful take on the theme - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 3:07 PM
Thank you, Jan, for you congratulations and your support hugs Eve
Nance Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 1:49 PM
This was great! Loved it! :)
Roper Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 3:07 PM
Thank you, Casarah,the honor of being in one of your contest hugs Eve
Y. Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 5:30 PM
Eve, you have penned a well written piece. As I continued to read I instantly thought of Marilyn Monroe(definitely a sassy lady). Excellent job! Good luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Roper Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 6:27 PM
Thank you, Alexis, Yes!!! She was a Sassy Lady, her husband Joe DiMaggio, is said to have "hated" the dress, shortly after wards they divorced. Hugs Eve
Pinet Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 12:18 PM
Well chosen words come alive in the reading and we cannot suppress a smile at the descriptive narration. Well written with a sassy wit. Emile.
La France Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 7:49 AM
Eve, a wondrous 7, sexy, flirty and awesome and thanks for visiting my poem, happy kitty
Lamoureux Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 7:48 PM
I love that picture of Marilyn! Great poem Eve!
Smith Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 2:51 PM
A Marilyn Monroe moment : ) ...good luck in the contest Tim
Roper Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 4:12 PM
Yes! One of my favorites. Hugs Eve
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