Sarah Vs. the Sonnet Man: Round One

What exactly is causing you to doubt?
Allow yourself to give in to the lust,
Since we both know that I have earned your trust,
By showing you what I am all about.
Once in a while, you have to air it out.
Why would you allow it to collect dust,
When, soon, you will start showing sings of rust,
Unless you relieve yourself of this drought.
Say the word, and I am ready to go
Satisfy you without a second guess.
Just say the word, and we can start the show,
Revealing nothing more and nothing less.
So, why would you bother with saying no,
When all that you have to do is say "yes!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Hales Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 11:23 AM
still waiting for part 2 ....lololol sarah x
Fraser Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 5:48 AM
Interesting challenge, I must follow this to it's end >> James
Hales Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 1:58 PM
I think this is going to be fun ..my dearest poet friends !!!! It is out of 15 though as requested from the sonnet man ..... I do believe he will come back with more than meets the eye in the next round ....!!! Your turn next Sonnet Man ..I will wait for the next one sarah x
Conway Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 1:41 PM
I love that it's put into italian sonnet form-not quite as aggressive as sarah's though! In my opinion round #1 goes to her!~Tirzah~
Sweetheart Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 1:20 PM
Well let the lady think about it.. Sarah asked me to critique this slam back and forth with u and she.. nice Sonnet flow and words expressed nicely.. slammin' is jammin' .. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Hales Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 11:56 AM
awww Pd you rock too x looks liek the battle has started ha ha ha not bad for a newby hehhehehe
A   Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 11:44 AM
Okay i read hers,,, better yet I read her work, and I follow her poetry, and she supports mine two..boy this is hard, I can see why you are battling her,,lol,,,she is awesome,,,so are you,,,but she rocks...hahah,,cool. She has a good one I read hers already,..p.d.
Hales Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 11:38 AM
OK MINE IS DONE !!! ROUND ONE SARAH
Hales Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 11:21 AM
oh you are serious at this battle hey ha ha ha sarah :-) I am thinking !!!
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