Sappy-

I feel so sad, but then happy I'm leaving this land, but I'll be free How are you feeling today poetry contest 2nd place Sponsor: Silent One

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/17/2023 1:59:00 AM

- Good luck... hope you'll be happy :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest -

R. B. Cawis
Date: 10/17/2023 2:17:00 AM

Thank you very much...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2023 11:06:00 AM

which land are you leaving? this makes me curious.

R. B. Cawis
Date: 10/16/2023 1:59:00 PM

I'm referring to my vacation... I've always been bullied... vacation to other places gives me peace of mind and freedom... Symbolically, I'm also referring to possiblity of departing from this world soon, because of my disease complications... Thank you very much for the concern...

Silent One

Date: 10/15/2023 8:23:00 AM

This was a clever one.. Congratulations on your win in the contest.

R. B. Cawis
Date: 10/16/2023 1:48:00 PM

Thank you very much...