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Sapphire Souvenirs

As I watch the waves crash and unfold gems in neon blue dust across ivory shores silky reflections scatter upon moon glazed tides in cadence and flaming twin stars whirl in circles sprinkling magic upon Poseidon’s realm There's a turquoise song for the healing hearts ruffling as lyrical melodies along idyllic crests of hope where memories float in a bottle of souvenirs ferrying sapphire swells of daydreams that ebb in tune to faith

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Debjani Mitra

Date: 11/14/2023 5:35:00 PM

What a smooth flow of words, like waves one after the other...your poetic power as majestic as the ocean

Bill Baker

Date: 10/28/2023 11:49:00 AM

Your Etheree is as smooth as the rolling waves to read, my friend. thanks for sharing the beautiful imagery that so commonly flows through your mind. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/20/2023 9:59:00 AM

Dearest Inky, this is a poetic wave that "unfolds" in stunning "gems" of imagery and color. Every line is just stunning and breathtaking as "moon glazed tides!" There is such a sense of metaphoric cresting joy like finding a message in a bottle. This beautiful poem has many layers like layers in the ocean. Thank you for such an amazing adventure in "sapphire" dreams. You have an amazing talent that you so beautifully share! Blessings of joy to you! Going into my favs!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/17/2023 6:14:00 AM

Stunning and magnetic in its outstanding imagery, my friend. Sparkling thanks, Pangie xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/17/2023 5:41:00 AM

Awesome work, very beautiful and creative:)

Valsa George

Date: 10/16/2023 6:59:00 PM

So lovely is your metaphorical represenation of waves crashing on the sea strand. 'Gems in neon blue dust across ivory sands scatter silky reflections". Who will refuse to enjoy this magic upon Poseidon's realm! It is so enticing to 'listen to the turquioise song ruffling as lyrical melodies'. Let us ride on the idyllic crests of hope where memories float in a bottle of souvenirs ! Dear friend, you have made me ride on the magic crest of delight. .....Simply fantastic!! Empress, you hold the rightful title, though not of royal blood.

Paige Hind

Date: 10/16/2023 3:33:00 PM

Gorgeous and inspirational writing! Ink, you have done it again!

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/16/2023 7:54:00 AM

I hope your daydreams turn into sparkling jewels. This Etheree is stunning. Its lovely lyrics and melodies captivated me. I love how you use your imagination to create beauty. It's amazing to include a turquoise tune that can heal broken hearts. This poem is wonderful, as anticipated from you, dear Ink.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/15/2023 3:03:00 PM

A beautiful poem. I wish all daydreams to become sapphires for you. Thank you for the image.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/15/2023 9:56:00 PM

Awn thank you so much too kind of you appreciate your support truly

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/15/2023 7:50:00 AM

is there anything you cannot do ? Your most precious, you and your poems, :)

Ink Empress
Date: 10/15/2023 10:03:00 PM

Awwn sweet rose this means alot coming from you. You are truly a gem

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/15/2023 7:15:00 AM

This Etheree is beautiful. It almost sang to me with its words and rhythm. Love how your mind thinks and creates. Loved there's a turquoise song for healing hearts. The last line says it all...faith! Will be faving this one, Ink. You have a beautiful soul. Have a wonderful day, Sara

Ink Empress
Date: 10/15/2023 10:13:00 PM

Awwn thank you so much truly for your kindness and sweetness. I appreciate the fave too, and im so happy you think this is good enough

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/15/2023 6:16:00 AM

Your heart sings... and I cling to your light, the light of a poet who is filled with insights, inklings, inspirations so brilliant they feel like the teasing of passions. Beautifully done. Love this. God bless you always, love, Gina

Ink Empress
Date: 10/15/2023 10:14:00 PM

Awn thank you beautiful Gina, i appreciate your kind and sincere support truly

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/15/2023 6:15:00 AM

There's a turquoise song for the healing hearts ruffling as lyrical melodies along idyllic crests of hope---simply beautiful! Awesome throughout, as always, Ink.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/15/2023 10:19:00 PM

Dear Vijay means alot coming from a talented poet like you, appreciate your kind and sincere support always

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/15/2023 6:03:00 AM

Very descriptive of an evening oceanic work. Your lines are always so creative and expressive. Thank you for sharing your talent and for dropping by my page. Sara K..I think you should share an Alexandrine poem with us. I know you would do a great job. There is a contest going on, but of course, I know mine has no chance because it doesn't nearly meet the requirements.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/15/2023 10:24:00 PM

Ah i had an alexandrine written already just havent posted yet. Awwn thank you so much for your encouraging comments you are so sweet. Always a pleasure reading your feedback

Sam Scott

Date: 10/15/2023 5:29:00 AM

You conjur up such imagery with your words, I can imagine observing the lighting and the colours as if being stood there. Another lovely poem, Ink :))

Ink Empress
Date: 10/15/2023 10:27:00 PM

Thank you Sam so very much for your kind feedback, you are so very kind

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/15/2023 4:16:00 AM

My gosh, I'm loving this whole velvet blue scene of the oceanic world! Like a mermaid, visualising every enchanting imagery infused in these eloquent words, I wish to witness the serenity of the marine eden, once.. Ahh, how breathtaking those waves are, as your poem describes their peaceful and cathartic nature.. "As I watch the waves crash and unfold gems in neon blue dust across ivory shores" That opening itself made me awestruck! It's really very gorgeous!! "Sapphire swells" Wow so beautiful

Ink Empress
Date: 10/15/2023 10:29:00 PM

Awwn thank you so much i wrote this etheree in just few minutes i cant believe you think this is good enough, that makes me happy. So grateful always for your support

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/15/2023 4:23:00 AM

Your wordplay is magical "sprinkling magic upon Poseidon’s realm", " Twin stars", "moon glazed tides", "turquoise song for the healing hearts" And the Poseidon reference.. This is just one of my fav etheree poems from you, as always, you excel in every poetic form that you try! Absolutely love this :)

Karen Croft

Date: 10/15/2023 2:41:00 AM

This is absolutely beautiful!

Ink Empress
Date: 10/15/2023 10:32:00 PM

Awwn thank you so much

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/15/2023 2:08:00 AM

Incredibly beautiful, so well constructed and dotted with wonderful imagery. A pleasant read. Blessings.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/15/2023 10:32:00 PM

Ah thank You Victor appreciate your support always

Silent One

Date: 10/15/2023 1:48:00 AM

A lovely double etheree for this contest. You have show the grand nature of your poetic vocabulary here not fazed by a restrictive form... You always write about these kind of poems so well, probably because you are from an exotic island and surrounded by beautiful sand and oceans... I can feel the serenity in your words as you create vivid imagery that surrounds you...

Ink Empress
Date: 10/15/2023 10:34:00 PM

Awwn you know me so well silent one, i was just about to jump in the sea, to swim away when i wrote this, took me few mins to write this. Oceanic poems are easy to write as im surrounded by blue seas and all that island ish nature which inspires my mermaid heart. Thank you for your sweet support always grateful

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2023 12:58:00 AM

Your writing is so gorgeous. Love the imagery!

Ink Empress
Date: 10/15/2023 10:34:00 PM

Thank you so very much kind soul for your support

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 10/15/2023 12:46:00 AM

waves crash and unfold gems in neon blue dust across ivory shores…mmmm the imagery on that beginning!!!!! sprinkling magic upon Poseidon’s realm Oooo love that!!!! where memories float in a bottle of souvenirs ferrying sapphire swells of daydreams… as true magical healing should aeee … beautiful piece !!! I am in love with the blue vibes to this piece!!! Aaaah now I shall go float in the blueness

Ink Empress
Date: 10/15/2023 10:36:00 PM

Ahh papi yes was swimming all day, now back to pampering myself today. Ugh getting a pedicure. And im like yawning. I dont think mornings are my thing.

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 10/15/2023 12:36:00 AM

This is beautiful. Well written.

Ink Empress
Date: 10/15/2023 10:37:00 PM

Thank you so much

Fading Star Silence

Date: 10/15/2023 12:32:00 AM

And allure of the oceans when I read this piece..feeling and resonating so deeply with your beautiful mind and heart, I want to read and reread..also wishing it could go on and on. I can truly say, you are walking talking poetry, dear poetic soul! It’s truly an honor to be on this writing journey with you my beautiful soul sis!!

Fading Star Silence

Date: 10/15/2023 12:30:00 AM

Ahhh..always so ethereally beautiful, powerfully breathtaking..you are truly the queen of grace and beauty when you ink, my beautiful soul sis! Truly unmatched in the way you shine in your divine poetry..so effortlessly and flawlessly woven, I can’t even just quote one..the whole of this poem has my heart and soul..the start so captivating it makes one want to read on, the end so powerfully emotive and unforgettable..the imagery in your poems takes me to other realms, I truly feel the depth

Ink Empress
Date: 10/15/2023 10:38:00 PM

Awwn my beautiful soul sis thank you for encouraging me to post my etheree and also for being so supportive you always see beauty in everything you are truly a beautiful soul! Im so blessed to have you in my life! Thank you again