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Sapphire, Honey, and Rose

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When I wrote each of these two Haikus over different seasons, they initially stood out to me as a standalone Haiku. However, after much contemplation, I believe they make a wonderful Haiku Sequence, for they emotionally complement each other.

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She is my sonnet: Sapphire eyes and honey hair… Smile within my storm- A rare blue rose blooms… Her psalm, a winter night’s flame, My heart, warm, flutters.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2024 11:08:00 AM

Another fantastic ku. So romantic

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 3/10/2024 12:03:00 PM

Dear Andrea, you are the best and I am thankful for your comments. - Blessings, Daniel

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/30/2023 11:32:00 AM

Ahh!! I enjoyed reading these today. Thanks for sharing them with us. Your visits to my page are uplifting. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 12/30/2023 11:48:00 AM

Thank You, Sara and Happy New Year! Blessings, Daniel

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/14/2023 8:12:00 AM

Dear Daniel, I am struck by the contrasting yet complimentary beauty (sunny/snowy, summer/winter, stormy/serene.. or a cherished love at different seasons of life) of these two haiku, which when strung together, provide an expression of a full and romantic appreciation for your "sonnet". How exquisite! Lovely vivid word choices stir wonderful thoughts and emotions. I adore the poem and the intriguing title too, which captivated my imagination immediately. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 12/14/2023 9:09:00 AM

Ahhh, You are the best, Susan, and I appreciate your lovely comments on the Haikus. They are some of my favorite forms to write. Have a wonderful rest of the week. - Blessings, Daniel

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/24/2023 11:28:00 AM

Hello Daniel Rodgers, A beautiful poem. filled with romance. enjoy y9our day my friend. /darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/24/2023 3:30:00 PM

Hello Daniel,You are welcome. My friend. /Darlene/

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 11/24/2023 1:42:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene for your wonderful comment! - Blessings, Daniel

Deb M

Date: 11/20/2023 7:00:00 AM

How very lovely and romantic Daniel! Debx

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 11/20/2023 8:04:00 AM

Good Morning, Deb, Thank you for your wonderful comment. When you have great people in your life, they become your inspiration! - Blessings, Daniel

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/18/2023 6:55:00 AM

So lovely, expressive, and romantic! Daniel, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 11/18/2023 2:40:00 PM

Thank you so much, Janice for your congrats and affirmations! Also congratulations to you for your amazing win and your short poem that says so much in such few words! - Blessings Daniel

Lisa Ricci

Date: 10/23/2023 7:20:00 AM

Hello Daniel. Good Morning. Yes, the haikus can stand separately and together as a whole as well. You did well placing them together. Love truly speaks. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Have a wonderful day. Take Care (smile)

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 10/27/2023 9:58:00 AM

Hello Lisa, thank you so much for your beautiful comments. I look forward to reading more of you wonderful poems.

Tom Woody

Date: 9/15/2023 12:55:00 PM

I agree they mesh beautifully. Awesome haikus and welcome to PS

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 9/24/2023 1:33:00 PM

Thanks Tom, Haikus can be just plain and it takes effort as you know to really say something in suchba few words.