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When I wrote each of these two Haikus over different seasons, they initially stood out to me as a standalone Haiku.  However, after much contemplation, I believe they make a wonderful Haiku Sequence, for they emotionally complement each other. 

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Sapphire, Honey, and Rose

She is my sonnet:
Sapphire eyes and honey hair…
Smile within my storm-

A rare blue rose blooms…
Her psalm, a winter night’s flame,
My heart, warm, flutters.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Thomas Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 10:03 AM
I agree Daniel, they complement each other beautifully.
Croft Avatar
September 12, 2024 at 5:03 AM
A beautiful combination! Not many people write of a blue rose. I used to take white roses and spray them a touch of blue when I was younger.
Rodgers Avatar
September 12, 2024 at 5:35 AM
Dear Karen, I always loved the idea of there being a true blue rose but there is none to be found in nature. When I was a child, there was a movie called "The Thief of Baghdad, where a blue rose was part of the plot. This staying in my head all these years. - Thank you for your wonderful comments. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Slaughter Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 10:44 AM
And quite perfect together, Daniel. Very nice.
Rodgers Avatar
August 23, 2024 at 8:04 AM
Hello Jim, Thanks for stopping by and leaving your kind comments. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 11:08 AM
Another fantastic ku. So romantic
Rodgers Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 12:03 PM
Dear Andrea, you are the best and I am thankful for your comments. - Blessings, Daniel
Kendrick Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 11:32 AM
Ahh!! I enjoyed reading these today. Thanks for sharing them with us. Your visits to my page are uplifting. Sara K
Rodgers Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 11:48 AM
Thank You, Sara and Happy New Year! Blessings, Daniel
Ashley Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 8:12 AM
Dear Daniel, I am struck by the contrasting yet complimentary beauty (sunny/snowy, summer/winter, stormy/serene.. or a cherished love at different seasons of life) of these two haiku, which when strung together, provide an expression of a full and romantic appreciation for your "sonnet". How exquisite! Lovely vivid word choices stir wonderful thoughts and emotions. I adore the poem and the intriguing title too, which captivated my imagination immediately. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Rodgers Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 9:09 AM
Ahhh, You are the best, Susan, and I appreciate your lovely comments on the Haikus. They are some of my favorite forms to write. Have a wonderful rest of the week. - Blessings, Daniel
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 11:28 AM
Hello Daniel Rodgers, A beautiful poem. filled with romance. enjoy y9our day my friend. /darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 3:30 PM
Hello Daniel,You are welcome. My friend. /Darlene/
Rodgers Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 1:42 PM
Thank you, Darlene for your wonderful comment! - Blessings, Daniel
M  Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 7:00 AM
How very lovely and romantic Daniel! Debx
Rodgers Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 8:04 AM
Good Morning, Deb, Thank you for your wonderful comment. When you have great people in your life, they become your inspiration! - Blessings, Daniel
Canerdy Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 6:55 AM
So lovely, expressive, and romantic! Daniel, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice
Rodgers Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 2:40 PM
Thank you so much, Janice for your congrats and affirmations! Also congratulations to you for your amazing win and your short poem that says so much in such few words! - Blessings Daniel
Ricci Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 7:20 AM
Hello Daniel. Good Morning. Yes, the haikus can stand separately and together as a whole as well. You did well placing them together. Love truly speaks. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Have a wonderful day. Take Care (smile)
Rodgers Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 9:58 AM
Hello Lisa, thank you so much for your beautiful comments. I look forward to reading more of you wonderful poems.
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