Sapphire, Honey, and Rose

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When I wrote each of these two Haikus over different seasons, they initially stood out to me as a standalone Haiku.  However, after much contemplation, I believe they make a wonderful Haiku Sequence, for they emotionally complement each other. 

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She is my sonnet:
Sapphire eyes and honey hair…
Smile within my storm-

A rare blue rose blooms…
Her psalm, a winter night’s flame,
My heart, warm, flutters.

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Date: 7/21/2025 10:03:00 AM
I agree Daniel, they complement each other beautifully.
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Date: 9/12/2024 5:03:00 AM
A beautiful combination! Not many people write of a blue rose. I used to take white roses and spray them a touch of blue when I was younger.
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Date: 9/12/2024 5:35:00 AM
Dear Karen, I always loved the idea of there being a true blue rose but there is none to be found in nature. When I was a child, there was a movie called "The Thief of Baghdad, where a blue rose was part of the plot. This staying in my head all these years. - Thank you for your wonderful comments. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Date: 8/21/2024 10:44:00 AM
And quite perfect together, Daniel. Very nice.
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Date: 8/23/2024 8:04:00 AM
Hello Jim, Thanks for stopping by and leaving your kind comments. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Date: 3/10/2024 11:08:00 AM
Another fantastic ku. So romantic
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Date: 3/10/2024 12:03:00 PM
Dear Andrea, you are the best and I am thankful for your comments. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 12/30/2023 11:32:00 AM
Ahh!! I enjoyed reading these today. Thanks for sharing them with us. Your visits to my page are uplifting. Sara K
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Date: 12/30/2023 11:48:00 AM
Thank You, Sara and Happy New Year! Blessings, Daniel
Date: 12/14/2023 8:12:00 AM
Dear Daniel, I am struck by the contrasting yet complimentary beauty (sunny/snowy, summer/winter, stormy/serene.. or a cherished love at different seasons of life) of these two haiku, which when strung together, provide an expression of a full and romantic appreciation for your "sonnet". How exquisite! Lovely vivid word choices stir wonderful thoughts and emotions. I adore the poem and the intriguing title too, which captivated my imagination immediately. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/14/2023 9:09:00 AM
Ahhh, You are the best, Susan, and I appreciate your lovely comments on the Haikus. They are some of my favorite forms to write. Have a wonderful rest of the week. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 11/24/2023 11:28:00 AM
Hello Daniel Rodgers, A beautiful poem. filled with romance. enjoy y9our day my friend. /darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/24/2023 3:30:00 PM
Hello Daniel,You are welcome. My friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 11/24/2023 1:42:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene for your wonderful comment! - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 11/20/2023 7:00:00 AM
How very lovely and romantic Daniel! Debx
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Date: 11/20/2023 8:04:00 AM
Good Morning, Deb, Thank you for your wonderful comment. When you have great people in your life, they become your inspiration! - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 11/18/2023 6:55:00 AM
So lovely, expressive, and romantic! Daniel, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice
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Date: 11/18/2023 2:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janice for your congrats and affirmations! Also congratulations to you for your amazing win and your short poem that says so much in such few words! - Blessings Daniel
Date: 10/23/2023 7:20:00 AM
Hello Daniel. Good Morning. Yes, the haikus can stand separately and together as a whole as well. You did well placing them together. Love truly speaks. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Have a wonderful day. Take Care (smile)
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Date: 10/27/2023 9:58:00 AM
Hello Lisa, thank you so much for your beautiful comments. I look forward to reading more of you wonderful poems.
Date: 9/15/2023 12:55:00 PM
I agree they mesh beautifully. Awesome haikus and welcome to PS
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Date: 9/24/2023 1:33:00 PM
Thanks Tom, Haikus can be just plain and it takes effort as you know to really say something in suchba few words.
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