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Getting down the chimney, Santa got stuck Belly got tautened while trying to duck All over smeared with black soot His face got dark like his boot Rescue force came to move him in a truck Dec.19.2022 ~ Placed First~ A Funny Santa Limerick Poetry Contest Sponsor- Tania Kitchin Syllable count- 10, 10, 7, 7, 10

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Line Gauthier

Date: 12/25/2022 3:17:00 PM

Poor Santa ! Warmest wishes for a wonderful new year to your and your loved ones, Valsa ~

Terry Miller

Date: 12/23/2022 11:39:00 PM

Very funny, congratulations

Eve Roper

Date: 12/23/2022 6:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Valsa. FUNNY! Many blessings and I wish you a Merry Christmas & a Happy New Year

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 12/23/2022 5:36:00 PM

Ah, he needs to lose a few. LOL Congratulations on your win Valsa! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/23/2022 3:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A fun write/picture. Guess some chimneys are just tooooo small. Blessings................

Tania Kitchin

Date: 12/23/2022 1:54:00 PM

Valsa, a funny one, congratulations on your first place win!

Valsa George
Date: 12/23/2022 8:43:00 PM

Thanks a lot Tania for picking up my limerick for a win !

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/23/2022 12:31:00 AM

Perhaps Santa is under too much stress and stress eating which causes him to no longer fit. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/22/2022 5:47:00 AM

Can you imagine how many Santa rescues have to be performed each Christmas Eve ;) LOL

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/21/2022 4:26:00 PM

Poor Santa, lovely write, Valsa, best wishes for the contest.

Deb M

Date: 12/21/2022 5:20:00 AM

Cute on Valsa….Debx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/20/2022 1:14:00 AM

Is it the chimney too small or is that amount of food?

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/19/2022 9:31:00 PM

Bottoms up, Santa! lol.

Arlo Parker

Date: 12/19/2022 6:42:00 PM

Good luck in the contest. Poor Santa...;o[

Valsa George
Date: 12/19/2022 8:59:00 PM

Poor fellow. Why don't people build bigger chimneys...? :) Lol. Thanks a lot Arlo

Anselmo Boles

Date: 12/19/2022 9:34:00 AM

LOL, cleverly writ Valsa! This is definitely a strong contender for this contest. Your Limericks have consistently been packing humorous punches! Happy Holidays to you and loved ones!!...ab

Valsa George
Date: 12/19/2022 8:57:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed my limerick. I too enjoy my limericks. But I don't think others enjoy them as much as I do. Thank you so much dear Anselmo....

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/19/2022 6:19:00 AM

Poor Santa! A fun read, Valsa. Best to you.

Valsa George
Date: 12/19/2022 8:53:00 PM

Indeed his predicament is so sad . Thank you Vijay !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/19/2022 2:39:00 AM

- He has to go on a diet :))) - Best wishes in the contest, Valsa :) - Wishing you and your loved ones a lovely Christmas - hugs

Valsa George
Date: 12/19/2022 5:12:00 AM

Sure.. Smile. Definitely after this episode he will seriously think of it. :))) Thanks a lot dear friend. ;

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/18/2022 11:22:00 PM

Lol a crane should do it because he's a big man. Good luck in the contest Valsa. Tom

Valsa George
Date: 12/19/2022 5:10:00 AM

Quite true.... ! He needs to be lifted with a crane. Thanks a lot Tom for your humorous response...