Valsa George Poet Limerick

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Santa's Predicament

Getting down the chimney, Santa got stuck
Belly got tautened while trying to duck
All over smeared with black soot
His face got dark like his boot
Rescue force came to move him in a truck

Dec.19.2022

~ Placed First~

A Funny Santa Limerick Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Tania Kitchin
Syllable count- 10, 10, 7, 7, 10

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Line Gauthier December 25, 2022 at 3:17 PM Poor Santa ! Warmest wishes for a wonderful new year to your and your loved ones, Valsa ~

Terry Miller December 23, 2022 at 11:39 PM Very funny, congratulations

Eve Roper December 23, 2022 at 6:56 PM Congratulations on your win, Valsa. FUNNY! Many blessings and I wish you a Merry Christmas & a Happy New Year

Linda Alice Fowler December 23, 2022 at 5:36 PM Ah, he needs to lose a few. LOL Congratulations on your win Valsa! :)

Paula Goldsmith December 23, 2022 at 3:31 PM Congratulations on your win. A fun write/picture. Guess some chimneys are just tooooo small. Blessings................

Tania Kitchin December 23, 2022 at 1:54 PM Valsa, a funny one, congratulations on your first place win! Valsa George December 23, 2022 at 8:43 PM Thanks a lot Tania for picking up my limerick for a win !

Sara Kendrick December 23, 2022 at 12:31 AM Perhaps Santa is under too much stress and stress eating which causes him to no longer fit. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues December 22, 2022 at 5:47 AM Can you imagine how many Santa rescues have to be performed each Christmas Eve ;) LOL

Sotto Poet December 21, 2022 at 4:26 PM Poor Santa, lovely write, Valsa, best wishes for the contest.

Deb M December 21, 2022 at 5:20 AM Cute on Valsa….Debx

Victor Buhagiar December 20, 2022 at 1:14 AM Is it the chimney too small or is that amount of food?

Gershon Wolf December 19, 2022 at 9:31 PM Bottoms up, Santa! lol.

Arlo Parker December 19, 2022 at 6:42 PM Good luck in the contest. Poor Santa...;o[ Valsa George December 19, 2022 at 8:59 PM Poor fellow. Why don't people build bigger chimneys...? :) Lol. Thanks a lot Arlo

Anselmo Boles December 19, 2022 at 9:34 AM LOL, cleverly writ Valsa! This is definitely a strong contender for this contest. Your Limericks have consistently been packing humorous punches! Happy Holidays to you and loved ones!!...ab Valsa George December 19, 2022 at 8:57 PM Glad you enjoyed my limerick. I too enjoy my limericks. But I don't think others enjoy them as much as I do. Thank you so much dear Anselmo....

Vijay Pandit December 19, 2022 at 6:19 AM Poor Santa! A fun read, Valsa. Best to you. Valsa George December 19, 2022 at 8:53 PM Indeed his predicament is so sad . Thank you Vijay !

Anne-Lise Andresen December 19, 2022 at 2:39 AM - He has to go on a diet :))) - Best wishes in the contest, Valsa :) - Wishing you and your loved ones a lovely Christmas - hugs Valsa George December 19, 2022 at 5:12 AM Sure.. Smile. Definitely after this episode he will seriously think of it. :))) Thanks a lot dear friend. ;

Tom Cunningham December 18, 2022 at 11:22 PM Lol a crane should do it because he's a big man. Good luck in the contest Valsa. Tom Valsa George December 19, 2022 at 5:10 AM Quite true.... ! He needs to be lifted with a crane. Thanks a lot Tom for your humorous response...