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Holiday Humor Limerick Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Written 12/15/2025

Santa's Disappointment

Giggle and jiggle the pudgy belly.
With a thunderous boom, Santa's jelly
were diet-free snacks.
"Breaking some knick-knacks,"
ordered Rudolph to the nearest deli.
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Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2026 at 12:10 AM
Cute one. Congratulations
Kitchin Avatar
December 31, 2025 at 3:28 AM
Eve, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun limerick.
Kendrick Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 1:37 PM
Congratulations on your work being on the winners' list in Tania's limerick contest. Way to go. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 9:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Santa's Disappointment" Limerick write again. Hope Rudolph got lots of good food at the nearest deli. Hahaha!!! Have a Very Blessed New Year 2026 writing away................
Jones Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 4:53 AM
This is hilarious! Love it! Good luck!
George Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 4:26 AM
Glad, Rudolph came to the aid of Santa whose pudgy belly is giggling and jiggling by ordering something from the nearest deli. Quite humorous!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 8:23 PM
How quaint and funny, for it made me smile.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 4:13 PM
HA! loved this holiday Limerick.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 11:20 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick write. Rudolph buy the nearest deli out so we can have a big party. Hahaha!!!  "Good Luck" I did "Tonight Sick Santa Had To Take Off." Have a fun day writing away............  
Rodgers Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 9:13 AM
Dear Eve, gave me a grin, I could almost hear the belly jiggle and Rudolph calling the shots. I love how you leaned into the playful chaos, it felt like holiday mischief in verse. Autumn Blessings, Dear Eve, Daniel
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