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Santa's Surprise

SANTA'S   SURPRISE   

Santa Claus stripped off his beard and red suit 
And left the show in the officers’ mess
Pulling the last tiny pieces of cotton wool from his stubbled chin
As he ran to his position 

At the end of the starboard bow catapult of the Carl Vinson
Eighty feet above the stormy grey Arabian Sea     
He watched as far off down the flight deck 
The final touches manoeuvred the F22 into the cradle
  
Its ordnance today a hundred kilogram fragmentation device 
For a rebel bunker in Afghanistan an hour’s flying time away
A surprise delivery for them;
The salt wind whipped the last cotton from his face.

Then his thumb pressed the green all-clear button  
Engine screamed to maximum and the catapult released
The flying load into the grey sky. Another successful delivery.
He checked his area of the mechanism after the aircraft blurred past

And hurried back inside to finish his Christmas dinner
Merry Christmas Santa, they all yelled as he came in again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/24/2011 4:17:00 PM
This is VERY different, Sydney. I am not good at understanding some of the military jargon in it but if it's what i think it is, I LOVE it. Such a twist on Santa!! I am glad you understood my sonnet so well. I read some really disgusting stuff here. I mean,erotica is one thing, but vulgarity is a real turn off. I think you must be a rare man!!! MErry Christmas.
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