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December.31.2024
Christmas Tizzy, 12 lines Poetry Contest
Sponsor.- Miranda Hawley
~ PLACED FIRST~

 

Santa Got Stranded in Florida

Traveling from Europe, Santa with his team had a pleasant time. Temperature being below zero, he enjoyed the cool clime. But on going to the South side of U.S, he felt, heat waves surround So humid it was in Florida with a warm weather all day round. The sultry heat of Key West and Miami made them so testy. He and his team found Orlando in Florida so sweaty. With sweltering heat, they were so badly smitten. To make matters worse, Santa’s sleigh got broken. Knowing this, the governor of state arranged to airlift them. In parachutes, presents were lowered to appease children’s dream. Thus, despite Santa being morbidly stranded in Florida, The timely intervention of the govt. saved them from all neuralgia!
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Hawley Avatar
January 17, 2025 at 4:14 PM
God bless the government of Florida for such a creative solution to making Christmas so good for the boys and girls and parents alike! The parachutes were simply a genius idea! Congrats!
George Avatar
January 18, 2025 at 4:37 AM
Greatly enjoyed your comment. Thank you so much for it and the placement given.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 9:48 AM
Back with Congratulation on your win. Sorry, I am late. I took a couple of days off. I enjoyed reading this fun/cute write again. Have a blessed day writing away...............
Woods Avatar
January 12, 2025 at 7:11 AM
Congratulations! I enjoyed reading your solution to the problem! Xo
Goldsmith Avatar
January 1, 2025 at 11:45 AM
What a fun/cute Santa in Florida write. I enjoyed reading it. Have a great day writing away....................
Buhagiar Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 10:23 AM
I loved your Tizzy poem, dear Valsa. The Governor saved the day for the children. May I wish you and your husband a happy and healthy New Year!
DiMino Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 7:28 AM
Another plus for Governor DeSantis -- getting a better resume for president every year. Very entertaining, lovely read. Thank you, Valsa.
Guptar Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 7:19 AM
A pleasant narrative in verse, which keeps the interest of the reader to the end. Wish you good luck in the contest. I take this opportunity to wish you a happy New Year with plenty of sunshine in your life.
Cunningham Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 3:28 AM
I know he'd struggle with the heat and humidity in Florida. I did lol. Good luck in the contest Valsa and a very happy new year to you and your family. Tom
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