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On a warm spring afternoon by the shore, I sculpt your image in the golden sands, Each curve and line shaped with love, Our promises etched in fragile strands. But the restless tide sweeps in too soon, Washing away what we swore to keep, Like whispers lost upon the wind, Or fleeting dreams that fade in sleep. A fistful of sand, a world of hope, Yet through my fingers, the grains still slip, Much like the love we tried to hold, Now scattered with the ocean’s grip. The sunset paints the sky in gold, Our secrets rest in silent dunes, Yet very grain still holds our tale, A melody of love and wounds.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 2/12/2025 10:16:00 PM
A lovely poem. Could have been a great entry for the contest. Like grains of sand, everything will slip through our fingers.
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Date: 2/10/2025 1:26:00 PM
I love the beach and your "Sandy Promises" write. No beach here and that is sad. Oh yes, "The sunset paints the sky in gold,." It does... Have A Blessed Day.............
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Date: 2/9/2025 10:32:00 PM
So lovely. Was this for Miranda's contest?
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Date: 2/9/2025 11:59:00 AM
Nice one. Interesting how love and sand slipping through our fingers go together.
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Date: 2/9/2025 11:24:00 AM
- A lovely poem with a sad ending, Jay - hugs
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