Sandwich

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day's sandwich golden sunrise, life's stresses.... red sunset

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/15/2022 11:13:00 PM

pretty and dashing.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/11/2022 5:46:00 PM

I vote for squeezing the stresses right out of the sandwich. Leave the golden sunrise and the red sunset. Stress? -- Begone! :) Gershon

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/12/2022 2:46:00 AM

Gershon, There are two helpers next to her and zap the work is done in 1/3 of the time. Children need to learn how to do all those chores so they will know how to survive when the mom/maid is gone. It just doesn't work that way, does it? Your visit lifted the stress right out the top of the house. Sara

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 1/8/2022 4:36:00 PM

Great aesthetic sandwich! between the starting and ending reds! a bit philosophical i would also say! Thanks - Marshall

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/9/2022 1:59:00 AM

Thank you, Marshall. I am way beyond the stresses of so much activity because of child rearing but still somedays are sandwiched. Your visit and comments are uplifting. Sara