Get Your Premium Membership

Sandstorm

The sands are slipping
Changing our landscape
As the night winds blow cool
Removing the sun's heat

Still I lay--parched
Yet shivering
I long for the heat
To quench me
Before I'm buried
In your winter sandstorm. 

6/11/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments
Please Login to post a comment
Date: 6/21/2015 11:09:00 AM
The imagery that is presented carries the essence of the statement the author is making and it is a powerful one. Your words speak in a metaphoric voice and supply the catalyst to spark further thought. Emile. #7
Login to Reply
Cervenka Avatar
Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 7/15/2015 12:08:00 AM
Emile, I may have thanked you on your page, or I may have changed pages before the reply fully posted, but thanks so much for your wonderful review.