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Sands

touching sands of time dancing galavanting in the brain a hermit crab popping his head out from the sands alone open arms embracing the stars searching among'st them a shining soul embers crying out to the beauty of it bleeding underneath holding in the sands a key building upwards holding them out sharing a dream the castle begins to build from out of the sand sweeping in from the ocean as it swells flowing gently out to embrace you softly yet beautiful

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Date: 9/6/2013 5:38:00 AM
Nicely done Liam.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/6/2013 3:09:00 PM
THANK YOU MY OLD FRIEND FROM THE HEART APPRECIATED
Date: 9/5/2013 5:07:00 PM
truly lovely dear Liam ty Shadow x smile
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/5/2013 5:34:00 PM
THANK YOU DEEPLY LINDA FOR THE SMILE LIGHT SHONE MY FRIEND
Date: 9/5/2013 3:33:00 PM
I love this poem..Its like a wish in a star and a dream within a dream....Beautiful.verses Liam.I wish i could be mused the way you do..Exquisite..
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/5/2013 3:40:00 PM
oh very nicely wrapped good night sweet dreams until tomorrow the sun will smile beautiful whistling from the clouds excellent comment heartfelt appreciated

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