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Sands

touching sands of time 
dancing galavanting
in the brain
a hermit crab
popping
his head out
from the sands

alone open arms
embracing the stars
searching
among'st them
a shining soul
embers crying out to
the beauty 
of it

bleeding underneath
holding in the sands
a key
building upwards
holding them out
sharing a dream

the castle 
begins to build
from out of the sand
sweeping in
from the ocean
as it swells
flowing gently out

to embrace you
softly 
yet 
beautiful

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/6/2013 5:38:00 AM
Nicely done Liam.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/6/2013 3:09:00 PM
THANK YOU MY OLD FRIEND FROM THE HEART APPRECIATED
Date: 9/5/2013 5:07:00 PM
truly lovely dear Liam ty Shadow x smile
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/5/2013 5:34:00 PM
THANK YOU DEEPLY LINDA FOR THE SMILE LIGHT SHONE MY FRIEND
Date: 9/5/2013 3:33:00 PM
I love this poem..Its like a wish in a star and a dream within a dream....Beautiful.verses Liam.I wish i could be mused the way you do..Exquisite..
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/5/2013 3:40:00 PM
oh very nicely wrapped good night sweet dreams until tomorrow the sun will smile beautiful whistling from the clouds excellent comment heartfelt appreciated

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