Sandbox


It seems like it was yesterday
   in backyard sandbox she had played;
      granddaughter loved to have her way
         with sand, her pail, scoop, shovel, spade.

She'd mold and build, with special care;
   imagination took its form.
      Sometimes she'd throw it up in air
         to watch it fly like a sandstorm.

Fast forward now just twenty years:
   our princess then, in her play sand,
      now lives a life on new frontiers
         soon headed for another land.

A first lieutenant based stateside,
   her unit soon will be deployed
      to mid-east base...Kuwait...supplied
         with desert sand, so vast and void.

Her 'sandbox' then, to serve with troops,
   logistics and supplies command,
      where sand is pushed with 'dozer 'scoops'...
         and windstorms fill the air with sand.

It seems like it was yesterday
   in backyard sandbox, she had played.
      As West Point grad, she makes her way
           to serve our country, unafraid.
         

Sandra M. Haight

~2nd Place~
Premiere Contest: Sandbox
Sponsor: Anthony Slausen
Judged:10/18/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/19/2016 2:56:00 PM
That is great work, Sandra. Makes me proud of your granddaughter...Larry
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Date: 10/19/2016 12:01:00 PM
A real winner! How beautifully you connected a sandbox to desert sand & service to the country! Balveen
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Date: 10/19/2016 9:23:00 AM
this sandbox of a story is a clear champ, sandra.. my best congrats on your fine win!..huggs
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Date: 10/19/2016 7:24:00 AM
Wow this is great sweet Sandra, well deserved placement lovely lady!:)-luloo
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Date: 10/19/2016 5:34:00 AM
Congratulations for your win and words. Also congratulations for the West Point Graduate, I do respect and also admire that, honestly. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 10/19/2016 4:38:00 AM
Congrats and thank you for the nice transitional view! JE
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Date: 10/18/2016 7:24:00 PM
I really like your take on the contest. You must be so proud of her. Congrats on a fine win.
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Date: 10/9/2016 8:10:00 AM
A heart warming write, Mrs Sandra. I know you are extremely proud. I watched my son take his oath for the Navy and I wept openly. It was very moving. I salute your granddaughter for her commitment and service.
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Date: 10/6/2016 4:11:00 PM
Sandra, you did the subject very well, you made a boring box into a wonderful poem you have a great imagination, and you are a great inspiration to all poets, well done x
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/6/2016 4:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Wendy. My poem is based on truth, and we just found out our granddaughter will be deployed, and this really fit the 'sandbox' theme for me. Thank you for your very supportive and kind comments! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/6/2016 2:06:00 PM
Hi Sandra: A beautiful poem and a beautiful tribute to her field of endeavor.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/6/2016 5:42:00 PM
Thank you very much, Ralph, for your lovely comment. Much appreciated for sure. Sandra
Date: 10/6/2016 7:53:00 AM
Very lovely write for your granddaughter, Sandra:) that's a tough job she has chosen but one filled with pride:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/6/2016 5:46:00 PM
Thank you, Jo. Yes, a tough job for sure. We are very proud of her. Hugs, Sandra
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