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Sandblasted

My heart sandblasted, shavings left upon your hands, and at your feet. Will you put them back together, or will you simply brush your hands clean, and sweep it away, like an annoying pile of dust? I think I know the answer, but I want to hear those ruby red lips say it, yet perhaps the silence, has already said it. Maybe I'm an idiot, but I plead with you, please pick up the pieces.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/20/2011 6:47:00 AM
I have read your poetry today and in my mind it is an interesting and excellent piece Ian. I will return again soon to read more of your writings. Love, Carol
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