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Sand Promises

(Sand Promises) Sand promises drown in tides. Washed away leaving tearing eyes, broken dreams in evening sighs. Sadness one attempts to hide. Sand promises are like lies. Born when human dreams despise an innocence that meekly tries to build on weak, foundation-ties. Oh, to find a fortress, strong sandcastles to caress, grains of promises at their best. Water and sand, a washed-out mess. We pray that truth will be expressed. Promises of sand, confessed, before the cheated heart, depressed- watches the gradual tide’s conquest.

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Date: 3/3/2025 7:12:00 PM
You took this prompt in a literal way. I do agree with all your points in this poem. "Promises of sand, confessed," wow, imagine if that happened more often, then what? Wow, anyways congratulations!
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Date: 3/2/2025 4:49:00 AM
very interesting write. 'Sand promises are like lies.Born when human dreams despise'. Congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/2/2025 6:27:00 AM
Thanks and blessings of favor for your life. JANIS
Date: 3/2/2025 4:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your writing. Beautiful poetry! The theme was very well illustrated.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/2/2025 6:28:00 AM
Hidden hints of hurt people can sometimes inflict upon our pure hopes. Blessings of favor. Thanks, Janis.

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