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Sand and Water - One Liner

Within pain’s marrow are the tears that bloom tomorrow’s dreams Sand and Water – Beth Nielsen Chapman ~13 Dec 2015~ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k-kvYYPYWFg

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Skat A

Date: 12/14/2015 10:51:00 PM

DAVID, Congratulations on your One Liner #7 win. **SKAT**

Paul Callus

Date: 12/14/2015 4:17:00 AM

This is an excellent one liner, John. I see from the comments below that it's a winner, so....Congratulations!! // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/13/2015 7:12:00 PM

wow, deep!!! Did you make up that line or is it hinted at in the song. I love it!!! Congrats.

David Mohn
Date: 12/13/2015 7:32:00 PM

the line is mine though it mirrors the song pretty closely. This song gets me every single time I hear it...tremendous lyrics and feeling

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/13/2015 6:48:00 PM

Good one, David. Congrats on your win. Sandra

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/13/2015 5:30:00 PM

Congratulations David.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/13/2015 2:51:00 PM

Many congrats on your win David:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison

Date: 12/13/2015 11:59:00 AM

lovely one liner - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx

Hannah Pearl

Date: 12/13/2015 10:09:00 AM

Stunning one liner!