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Doubtless, aging and other factors contribute to my problems with that dazzling reflected light from the waves which causes those black dots to appear before my eyes, and the same aging and other factors also add to my insistence on merely viewing and not participating in activities enjoyed by the young at the shore.  But the sun and the sand and the sea are still all appreciated by me, in spite of my advancing age.

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A light with bite that wounds the eye is breaker borne. Ashore, this bright morning burns black holes upon the retina: sun spots that dot the dunes. My vision sweeps, west to east, a stretch of beach. Each wave, which breaks then smooths to ripples, retreating leaves its flotsam: spume-laden seaweed and shells the sun will bleach to blinding white in hours. A swimmer bodysurfs to water's edge. I sip my tonic, sponge my brow, and, through tinted glasses, confront the terrace crowd of others, cowed, like me, by youth, by sun, by sand and sea.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/22/2012 8:52:00 AM
Although this was a featured poem last week, in October 2012, it received no comments. Was there some problem that no one wished to mention to the writer?
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Date: 4/25/2011 12:33:00 PM
You paint a vivid scene. Poetic and descriptive.
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