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Sand

Salty air and the sea accent the grains perfectly; names written, secrets hidden; diary locked by the waves.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/5/2013 4:00:00 PM
Hi Melani, an awesome good win...PD
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Date: 9/5/2013 3:37:00 PM
Great flow to this winning work.Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 9/1/2013 2:55:00 PM
Oh loved this....I've written thoughts like this in the sand!...congratulations
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Date: 9/1/2013 2:05:00 PM
Melani, congrats on your win with this lovely acrostic! Love, Kim
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Date: 9/1/2013 2:04:00 PM
Melani, , congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ SKAT
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Date: 8/31/2013 8:31:00 PM
lovely write...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 8/31/2013 5:54:00 PM
Congratulations for your win in my contest.This one had a very nice feeling to it.
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Date: 8/26/2013 2:37:00 PM
This was full of serene beauty, w/a touch of mystery (secrets hidden). Excellent job!
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Date: 8/26/2013 1:21:00 PM
Hi Melani, Nice acrostic write you have here...Well done.. Ken..
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