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Sanctuary of Obscurity

Dare one impose upon the primitive soul, Revolving around solitude—a savant hold warmer than the sun Entranced by every ideal—loving many and no one Would they hesitate to break the sensational sway… As petals of tiger lilies fall upon its sunset eyes Tremulous sighs and exhalations—dedicated to wisdom Looking to the sky…a vast wilderness of celestial light Fixated in the center of star-drafted darkness The wheel of its heart turns smoothly Oiled with only the finest knowledge With brutal truths seeping into the empty spaces Not even the most charming can break its stance Feeble smiles melt away into frustrated admiration For not one could dare embark upon her spirit Without looking first deep within himself Tearing apart the pride that so recklessly razes Ensnaring all that behold him All but one Had one selflessly walked into the midst of this fraction of heaven, He would watch faithfully a sunrise on the legs of endurance And the embracing, smiling arms of patience If one only left their guard for the Sanctuary of Obscurity The skies of white light upon dark would open in reverence The lips that are so fixated upon moist discovery Would have their gentle hold on mortal purity To allow such a moment to exist, Kindheartedness must coexist And hovering humility harnessed deep in vicious sincerity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/7/2014 8:53:00 PM
Such essence must be held as mastery... Enjoyed this poem Laura immensely... Verlena
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Date: 8/6/2014 8:33:00 PM
I absolutely love the meditative quality in this superb composition Laura. Every time I absorb the paradoxes and spirit in these tremendously original thought forms I feel like I'm discovering something new and awesome within myself. " Entranced by every ideal, loving many and no one...As petals of tiger lillies fall upon it's sunset eyes..." so beautifully mysterious! We must be true to value purity. A Masterpiece of soul Laura...J.A.B.
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