Sanctuary

That place that wreaks havoc
cigarette boxes lying on the floor
Drowning in angst - your place
call it home, call it sanctuary
Call it whatever -
tell it to the bartender
Who's pouring another 
whiskey in your honor
You're the one that's
on top tonight - lovin' life 
With your ripped denim jeans
and smoke-stained leather 
Pour me another! you say
so you could get back on
The motorcycle to heaven
and never slow down
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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May 5, 2017 at 8:25 AM
I can feel the loneliness and suffering in this. Even if they are the person of the hour at the bar, it doesn't make any difference for even in a crowded club they still feel alone, Nicely done Trisha.
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May 5, 2017 at 8:29 AM
Thank you very much! Your feedback is greatly appreciated as always.
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November 28, 2015 at 4:10 PM
awesome write. SKAT
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April 21, 2017 at 1:42 PM
Thank you!
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November 27, 2015 at 8:48 PM
One man's idea of sanctuary, cleverly construed. The image of the biker comes through loud and clear! BRAVO Trisha! Best wishes, Keith 7
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November 27, 2015 at 8:56 PM
Whoops! my bad! Thanks for setting me straight. K.
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November 27, 2015 at 8:51 PM
Thank you very much. But it's not necessarily about a male biker, it can be about a troubled female biker as well.
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