Samhain

SAMHAIN – All Hallow’s Eve

(Anapestic tetrameter)


As the evening approaches and darkness surrounds,
When orb spiders are weaving to capture their prey,
then, all over the country, a madness abounds,
Where abnormal behavior is out on display.

On the streets of the suburb an army descends,
To amuse their weird bones for a moment of thrill,
With some tricking and treating their friendship extends,
While their costumes portray an unpleasant death chill.

Though the meaning of this day, is lost on these mobs,
An old Gaelic event brings an end to the crop,
Or beginning of winter with sniffles and sobs,
and the feast of All Saints, ill-designed from the top*.

Yet the death that they honor was with them from birth,
Unaware of its presence while living on earth.

3rd place trophy winner

10.21.2022

* Pope Gregory 3rd changed the feast day to 1st November which now incorporates some of the traditions of Samhain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 11/16/2022 7:28:00 PM
The entire poem is beautiful. The last couplets are, indeed, very beautiful. Congratulations!
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Sean Kibble
Date: 11/16/2022 8:14:00 PM
Thank you Christuraj
Date: 11/16/2022 12:13:00 PM
Dear Sean, congratulations for your excellent win in Craig's contest. Your wonderful imagery captures the spirit of the night with rhythmic rhyming ease. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Sean Kibble
Date: 11/16/2022 1:37:00 PM
Thank you Susan for your views. I was sure that Craig was looking for perfect meter.
Date: 11/16/2022 6:51:00 AM
Sean, congrats on an artful interpretation - this is a challenging form and you've done it proud!
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Sean Kibble
Date: 11/16/2022 1:35:00 PM
Glad you appreciated my effort especially the technical side. Thanks for the placement and for challenging us with this form.
Date: 10/21/2022 10:25:00 AM
Sean, your poem has all the attributes of a well written Sonnet, with the correct cadence of the tetrameter required. Kudos to you!
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Sean Kibble
Date: 10/21/2022 2:54:00 PM
Hi Jenna, thank you for your lovely comment - nothing less works for Craig. Good to meet you. Take care
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