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Same Old Dream

as the world wakes to make, and take and break as the light draws near a sneering voice in my ear says wake, you have your part to take you have your time to make and break to sleep to dream to make mistakes another way another day To lose your hair to change your face to work for a while to earn your place to dance at parties to sing and laugh to have quiet times and long candlelit baths to find true love and lose it again to see see death and violence too profound to explain to hope or to pray to leave or to stay to travel, to see what this world contains And each morning the world awakes repeats its warning to make, and take and break as the light draws near a sneering voice in my ear says wake, we have your bones to break Sun creaks insidiously across my floor Cars car by outside and my bladder is sore

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Date: 10/17/2018 10:26:00 AM
Wow! You've captured the angst of life perfectly. As we get older, remember, "go" when ever you have the chance to ;P
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Date: 10/14/2018 3:59:00 PM
I love it that you hear the sneering voice in the morning. I do too. It is nice to think we have time for long candelit baths and to find true love. This is a terrific poem. Easy to read, and fast-paced. Welcome to PoetrySoup. You have found some of your new best friends.
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Greig Turnbull
Date: 10/15/2018 12:23:00 AM
Hi Caren, I'm over the moon with your comment! Thank you so much. I'm new to this so the feedback is fantastic. That poem is something I tell myself when everything feels like a struggle. I'm not technically good and don't know much about form etc. I just love words and images. I'm looking forward to reading your work when I get home......Bacon Boy intrigues!

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