Same Dawn

Grey mist guileless browse mingles with in the moor top... valley greets the sun. © Harry J Horsman 2012

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Wilma Neels

Date: 8/7/2012 6:23:00 AM

A stunning image Harry :) miss you too hey, it is cold and rainy here in Cape Town, some cities even had some snow.. That is something out of the norm for us! Hope your week is a great one :) love Wilma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/6/2012 4:59:00 PM

I can see this scene but I haven't been to UK to know if what I imagine is real..Great descriptive work..What is the exact definition of moor?Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/6/2012 5:00:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by my work..Your comments are valued by me..Sara

Joseph May

Date: 8/6/2012 3:33:00 PM

nice haiku Harry...thanks for stopping by...Joseph

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/6/2012 2:05:00 PM

My Favorite poet. Thanks

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/6/2012 2:03:00 PM

Excellent haiku of greeting the Sun. Loved always, bl

David Williams

Date: 8/6/2012 11:26:00 AM

Harry, love this, Mandy said this morning that she had a mist rising, seems like you had the same vision, well done...David

Tirzah Conway

Date: 8/6/2012 9:00:00 AM

Sounds like a beautiful morning! Wonderful haiku Harry!~Tirzah~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/6/2012 7:12:00 AM

Lovely haiku Harry - Have a nice new week. - Take care - oxox // Anne-Lise :)