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Salty Tasting Love

Under the moonlight
                                                clothes drop to a silky floor
                                                     two bodies drip slow

                                                      Eyes do the talking
                                           while tongues see the candy treat
                                                       all under night sky

                                                       Sunrise reflects us
                                               drenched in juices of our lust
                                                        salty tasting love 

"Sexy Haiku Contest"
written by Michael J Falotico

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/9/2012 4:09:00 PM

AAA,,, reading this poem once again.. How are you?? I'm watching movies, avoiding the football games.. LOL... have you seen how the soup has slowed down a lot... I wonder why??? I think it needs more salt...LOL... xox~PD

Sean Goodwin

Date: 12/1/2012 8:17:00 AM

Yes love making isn't just sweet but can be salty too if you know what I mean! Enjoyed this hot haiku. -- Sean

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/1/2012 7:28:00 AM

Hi Michael with skills like these you are a natural for my Questionku contest, consider giving it a shot. 4 5 6 ending in a question

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/18/2012 7:55:00 AM

Congrats on your win for this wonderful poem about taste of love under the moon light and under the Sun. Enjoyed lately. Thanks for your comment on my write. Loved always, bl

Seren Roberts

Date: 11/15/2012 2:31:00 PM

Congratulations Michael ...Seren

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/15/2012 7:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in SandyIvy's "Natural/Nature Sexy Haiku" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Carma Sanderson

Date: 11/15/2012 4:58:00 AM

Congrats on the hot haiku contest, well deserved xoxox Carma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/13/2012 5:35:00 PM

SUPER CONGRATS MICHAEL LUV ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS SULTRY STEAMY HAIKU .. OH RON IS FOGGING UP READING AS HIS LIBIDO IS WORKING OVERTIME READING ALL THE WINNING POEMS LUV .. U R ALWAYS NUMBER ONE TO YOUR JG ..FOREVER XOXO

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2012 4:59:00 PM

congratulations. I had seen this one earlier and forgot to say how I enjoyed the title of it as well. (sorry about my prediction though!)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/13/2012 12:27:00 PM

Hello, Michael I knew I would see you on the winners list... Congratulations,,, xox~pd

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/13/2012 12:05:00 PM

Very passionate work..Congrats on your great win..Sara

Joseph May

Date: 11/13/2012 9:34:00 AM

congrats on your win Michael

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 11/13/2012 8:34:00 AM

Congrats Michael on the win with these sexy haikus!! Jag

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/13/2012 7:54:00 AM

Congratulations Michael , steamy xx

Kash Poet

Date: 11/13/2012 6:05:00 AM

Congratulations Michael on your win!Loved it on my first read.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/13/2012 1:36:00 AM

Hey, visiting you to say CONGRATULATIONS WITH your winning poem in the contest: "Sexy Haiku" - fun contest and many good suggestions. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 11/12/2012 10:23:00 PM

Sexy haiku. TY, Sandy'

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/12/2012 7:19:00 PM

beautifully romantic...you are on a roll my sweet friend! Awesome haikus

Joseph May

Date: 11/12/2012 4:37:00 PM

nice set of haiku Michael......best wishes..

Erich Goller

Date: 11/12/2012 2:47:00 PM

Salty Tasting Love indeed. a very romatic and sensual Haiku Suite, I enjoyed reading it. God bless you.Erich

Rollo West

Date: 11/12/2012 11:47:00 AM

Wow, sensual Haiku Michael, great write, and thank you for commenting on my piece. Rollo

Len Gasun

Date: 11/12/2012 9:51:00 AM

Thumbs up for this sexy haiku you've penned my dear friend, Michael. Great pieces for the contest indeed! Good luck always! Again, I'm always thanking you for visiting my work. I am deeply touched and honored. Million thanks! More power and blessings to you always. Please give my sweet regards to your mom. love/hugs, Leonora