Michael J. Falotico Poet Haiku

Salty Tasting Love

Under the moonlight
                                                clothes drop to a silky floor
                                                     two bodies drip slow

                                                      Eyes do the talking
                                           while tongues see the candy treat
                                                       all under night sky

                                                       Sunrise reflects us
                                               drenched in juices of our lust
                                                        salty tasting love 

"Sexy Haiku Contest"
written by Michael J Falotico

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Poet Destroyer A December 9, 2012 at 4:09 PM AAA,,, reading this poem once again.. How are you?? I'm watching movies, avoiding the football games.. LOL... have you seen how the soup has slowed down a lot... I wonder why??? I think it needs more salt...LOL... xox~PD

Sean Goodwin December 1, 2012 at 8:17 AM Yes love making isn't just sweet but can be salty too if you know what I mean! Enjoyed this hot haiku. -- Sean

Richard Lamoureux December 1, 2012 at 7:28 AM Hi Michael with skills like these you are a natural for my Questionku contest, consider giving it a shot. 4 5 6 ending in a question

Bl Devnath November 18, 2012 at 7:55 AM Congrats on your win for this wonderful poem about taste of love under the moon light and under the Sun. Enjoyed lately. Thanks for your comment on my write. Loved always, bl

Seren Roberts November 15, 2012 at 2:31 PM Congratulations Michael ...Seren

Carol Sunshine Brown November 15, 2012 at 7:08 AM Congratulations on your win in SandyIvy's "Natural/Nature Sexy Haiku" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Carma Sanderson November 15, 2012 at 4:58 AM Congrats on the hot haiku contest, well deserved xoxox Carma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 13, 2012 at 5:35 PM SUPER CONGRATS MICHAEL LUV ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS SULTRY STEAMY HAIKU .. OH RON IS FOGGING UP READING AS HIS LIBIDO IS WORKING OVERTIME READING ALL THE WINNING POEMS LUV .. U R ALWAYS NUMBER ONE TO YOUR JG ..FOREVER XOXO

Andrea Dietrich November 13, 2012 at 4:59 PM congratulations. I had seen this one earlier and forgot to say how I enjoyed the title of it as well. (sorry about my prediction though!)

Poet Destroyer A November 13, 2012 at 12:27 PM Hello, Michael I knew I would see you on the winners list... Congratulations,,, xox~pd

Sara Kendrick November 13, 2012 at 12:05 PM Very passionate work..Congrats on your great win..Sara

Joseph May November 13, 2012 at 9:34 AM congrats on your win Michael

S.Jagathsimhan Nair November 13, 2012 at 8:34 AM Congrats Michael on the win with these sexy haikus!! Jag

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl November 13, 2012 at 7:54 AM Congratulations Michael , steamy xx

Kash Poet November 13, 2012 at 6:05 AM Congratulations Michael on your win!Loved it on my first read.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 13, 2012 at 1:36 AM Hey, visiting you to say CONGRATULATIONS WITH your winning poem in the contest: "Sexy Haiku" - fun contest and many good suggestions. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sandy Ivy D November 12, 2012 at 10:23 PM Sexy haiku. TY, Sandy'

Sandra Adams November 12, 2012 at 7:19 PM beautifully romantic...you are on a roll my sweet friend! Awesome haikus

Joseph May November 12, 2012 at 4:37 PM nice set of haiku Michael......best wishes..

Erich Goller November 12, 2012 at 2:47 PM Salty Tasting Love indeed. a very romatic and sensual Haiku Suite, I enjoyed reading it. God bless you.Erich

Rollo West November 12, 2012 at 11:47 AM Wow, sensual Haiku Michael, great write, and thank you for commenting on my piece. Rollo

Len Gasun November 12, 2012 at 9:51 AM Thumbs up for this sexy haiku you've penned my dear friend, Michael. Great pieces for the contest indeed! Good luck always! Again, I'm always thanking you for visiting my work. I am deeply touched and honored. Million thanks! More power and blessings to you always. Please give my sweet regards to your mom. love/hugs, Leonora

Bukang Liwayway November 12, 2012 at 9:02 AM whew!! (^__^) nice Haiku friend Michael...Good luck in the contest..hugs, Maria

Joyce Johnson November 11, 2012 at 6:36 PM I'm going to be careful here. I do thank you for my placement in your contest. My cheeks are burning. Love, Joyce

Skat A November 11, 2012 at 3:40 PM O la la' the price is right' ~SKAT~

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