Tim Ryerson Poet Tanka

Salty Sweet Her Taste

salty sweet her taste
her forehead, her nose, her lips
oh yes the pale lips
first the touching and brushing
upper, lower and corners

salty sweet her taste
her sudden ohhh and moaning
oh yes the moaning
engaging, enveloping
engulfing my hungry heart

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Poet. Undertaker December 1, 2013 at 9:07 AM fun reading this one Tim.This one brings down your age.Great poem. (: ) Jenish.

Skat A November 7, 2013 at 12:00 PM Tim, *nice* SWEET Or SALTY win................... HUGS ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A November 6, 2013 at 7:28 PM Tim, Congratulations On your way to xool Sweet & Sour win... always~ Linda aka PD

Nette Onclaud November 6, 2013 at 11:39 AM sizzling, tim.. hmm, a deliciously passionate write...happy cheers to you for your win!..:) huggs

Donna Jones November 5, 2013 at 10:05 PM Congratulations Tim....

Ilene Bauer November 5, 2013 at 9:17 AM great poem! congrats on placing in the contest...

Andrea Dietrich November 5, 2013 at 8:06 AM Time, this was GREAT!! Congrats in my contest. Soupmail.

Kim Van Breda October 29, 2013 at 8:51 AM PHEW... got a bit heated reading this :) Great Tanka, and excellent entry for Andrea's contest.

Jack Horne October 27, 2013 at 2:12 PM love this sensual write, my friend

Donna Jones October 25, 2013 at 11:52 AM Wow Tim....engulfing..now that's a salty and sweet word all by itself....how ya doin?

Eileen Manassian October 21, 2013 at 3:16 AM Tim....read this brfore....Overwhelmed!!! Came back to say.....Awesome....beautiful....sensuous.....breathtaking...a winner....hugs

Kathryn Collins October 19, 2013 at 11:56 AM Zazzoli

Jack Ellison October 18, 2013 at 9:43 PM WOWSERS! My good friend Tim... you outdided yourself with this passionate write! A winner!

Richard Lamoureux October 18, 2013 at 5:38 PM Sounds like a great way to get my daily intake of salt!

Debbie Guzzi October 18, 2013 at 4:05 PM yikes WOW I need a cold shower! cher what are you doing to the female population of soup! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Sandra Adams October 17, 2013 at 10:00 AM very sensual take on the theme...enjoyed this one from your pen...good luck in the contest :)

Nette Onclaud October 17, 2013 at 12:25 AM ohhh, tim...this is boh earthy and soulful.. the delicacy of your piece brings out a different flavor that delights the senses... how could anyone top this?... you rule!..:) huggs

Dr.Ram Mehta October 16, 2013 at 9:50 PM Very very salty expressions turning into a sweet one, Timk

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders October 16, 2013 at 9:08 PM Wow, hot stuff, Tim! I'm a little flushed myself. A great entry for the contest...Love and blessings, Rhonda

Carrie Richards October 16, 2013 at 8:49 PM OOO LA LA....!! .......felt like is was a peeping Tom !! lol........ you have me blushing for intruding!!

Charlotte Puddifoot October 16, 2013 at 7:15 PM oh and I like the alliteration - I was so distracted by the heat that I only just noticed it! haha

Charlotte Puddifoot October 16, 2013 at 7:13 PM ooh I like this, very sensual! an original and erotic take on the theme, andrea should enjoy this one, good luck in the contest...:)