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Sally Snake Bites Her Tongue

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Sally snake seethed silently She’d bitten her tongue and it hurt Sally slowly sidled in the sand dunes - Unable to speak but alert The venom it spread through her body She hissed and cursed in her head No antidote for the poison within her Now alas poor Sally snake lies dead 30th June 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Akshaya Madhu
Date: 7/14/2016 10:51:00 AM
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That piece of urs btings a smile on my face
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2016 2:20:00 PM
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Thanks for your comment Akshaya I am sorry I have only just found your comment otherwise I would have repsonded sooner:-(:-( hugs Jan xx
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Carol Eastman
Date: 7/10/2016 9:17:00 AM
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Bravo! LOL... Most Unique! Loved it... Poor Sally Snake...
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2016 12:03:00 PM
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Thanks Carol glad you enjoyed my poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/1/2016 7:06:00 PM
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Hahaha...:-) if I was Sally I would have died a very long time. Love it!
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2016 12:03:00 PM
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LOL Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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Wilfred Aniagyei
Date: 7/1/2016 6:44:00 AM
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Nice piece, Jan!
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2016 12:04:00 PM
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Thanks Wilfred:-) hugs Jan xx
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/1/2016 5:20:00 AM
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Lovely imaginative poem, Jan. Barry.
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2016 12:04:00 PM
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Thanks Barry:-) hugs Jan xx
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 7/1/2016 3:44:00 AM
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Silly Sally...ha ha:) Nice fun poem:)
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2016 12:05:00 PM
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Thanks Jo I had fun with the alliteration:-) hugs Jan xx
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Pam Deremer
Date: 6/30/2016 5:37:00 PM
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How very funny!
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2016 12:05:00 PM
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Thanks Pam:-) hugs Jan xx
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Daniel Turner
Date: 6/30/2016 3:56:00 PM
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I love the subject matter. As you are well aware, if not for snakes we would be over run with rodents and insects. I love your sense of humor, Jan.
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2016 12:06:00 PM
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So true Daniel - we have rats (or longtails) as they are called on the Island but I have never seen a snake:-) hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/30/2016 12:11:00 PM
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- Must admit I'm terrified of snakes .... I hope it's dead - Great written, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2016 12:06:00 PM
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I'm not keen either Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 6/30/2016 11:01:00 AM
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ha! very amusing, jan! i like it!
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/30/2016 11:14:00 AM
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Just a silly poem I wrote:-) hugs Jan xx

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