Sale At Walmart

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~Sale At Wal-Mart~ (Free Style) I heard there's a sale A sale right at Wal-Mart They're about to sail Still their biggest sale I receive their notice It came with my e-mail Don't care what hails Nothing beat their sales So I'll run to Wal-Mart Before sales get started Want to be there first Before people doors burst So I'll see you there Buying tons of footwear. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 January.25.2016

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Hannah Borke

Date: 7/28/2017 4:06:00 PM

I challenged myself to find a poem of yours that's not full of emotion. This one fits the bill. I'm intrigued by the popularity of your poems, but if you shop at a Walmart sale, you're normal.