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Saints and Sinners

All thorns seek turning toward the white cloud To bloom in some green blue and pink flower And feel the touch of human black eyes loud Or become leaves moistened in the shower So do sinners as their compensation To look like the blue sky and smile likewise But to most it is a remote ocean A few can get those crystals of peace ice This way some may be like Saint Teresa Others remain both a saint and sinner As dictated by their amygdala Some seek healing some himself a healer We are amalgams of sinner and saint A black and orange in an image quaint ----------------------------------------------------------- 28/10/2016

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Date: 10/28/2016 2:44:00 PM
we both have the light and dark within; most saints pass through the dark to be enlightened.. beautiful, probir..huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/28/2016 11:45:00 PM
Thank you, nette ...
Date: 10/28/2016 8:34:00 AM
The saint and the sinner both sanctuary have found deep in our souls and depending who is the winner claims the soul as his own! Great writing my good friend, Probir! A seven!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/28/2016 12:55:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 10/28/2016 7:58:00 AM
THIS...."We are amalgams of sinner and saint A black and orange in an image quaint". Exactly this. No black or white.... Wonderful. Good luck in the contest.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/28/2016 12:56:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 10/28/2016 6:29:00 AM
Probir, I'm speechless!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/28/2016 7:21:00 AM
Thank you ...