Sails with Sunrise

boat spurs red river awakens white sails with sunrise dawn’s hues spruce up the hills too monumental sun no wonder morning birds tweet trees’ sappiest at first shine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Crandall Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 6:40 PM
I guess sometimes it pays off to wake up earlier than the sun!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 6:48 PM
It certainly does!
Hind Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 3:27 PM
a beautiful Sedoka ... I would like to wake up to this, lol
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 6:48 PM
Right?! Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 11:15 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative write. Early morning is a great time of the day. Have a blessed day writing away................
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 12:17 PM
Love early morning! Thank you, Paula!
George Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 6:12 AM
The first signs of dawn are generally breathtaking. You have described a beautiful morning. Enjoyed the poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 6:14 AM
Thank you, Valsa!
Jones Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 4:03 AM
Love the imagery Kim! Didn’t know that about sap in trees!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 6:13 AM
Thank you, Karen!
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