Sailor's Song

You and I are but the wind's sigh.
The break of the ocean against this beach
is your lips' murmur in the night.
You have opened my throat
to feel the soft pattering of infants
and see the shine of a distant moon,
but you have not seen
the evergreen trees trembling beneath my collarbone
or the waterfall spilling from my knees.
You have not seen the silent nuns
that pass along the ridges of my spine
or the hungry crows lined round my heart.
You listen to my breathing 
in this lightless dawn and hear
the break of waves off a lighthouse shore.
I wake to find your hands
have the calluses of a sailor
too long away --

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/3/2011 10:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Sam. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 11:04:00 AM
A beautiful poem, very touching.
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Date: 6/28/2011 6:19:00 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Sam
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Date: 6/27/2011 6:21:00 PM
Anything about sailor's, the sea or islands and lighthouses. Congrats on the feature from and old sailor. Vince
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Date: 6/27/2011 6:41:00 AM
Your beginning is wonderful and just leads on to more wonderful things. I really love the images you created by combining nature w/the human body. I think this poem flows well and really speaks to people, at least me! Congratulations on it being featured this week. It's lovely. I hope you enter this in a contest.
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Date: 6/27/2011 5:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your well written poetry being featured this week Sam. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2011 2:56:00 PM
yes, the poem has the song like quality, Sam
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