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Sailing In the Fog

As we sail across the sea A dense fog appears to me With the wind sightly blowing Your sail makes the mast stand tall I see your beauty down below My cabin will fill your soul The arch of your sail as the wind blows Creates this movement of my ship Moving faster through the sea While the waves move so gently As the water splashes into your ship It brings a great peace to me Our ship will always sail on coarse My compass will navigate straight It always leads me to the bottom Of your happiness in the fog

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Date: 1/28/2019 4:15:00 PM
Hi Bobby, I found this write to be very romantic. I will never think of "being in the fog" the way.You painted such a lovely picture and view with words. I enjoyed what I saw. Well done:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/28/2019 1:00:00 PM
Oh that last stanza so wonderful, I too am happy in the fog!
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Bobby May
Date: 1/28/2019 1:11:00 PM
Thank you Michelle!! yes, the fog does make one happy so true, :-)

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